this has been a really interesting pre-shippuden fic! it's a shame it's discontinued. because i would've been interested in seeing more happen once naruto is back... oh well. if you ever do get your inspiration back i'll be waiting ;)

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Oh man I hope you comeback and finish this cause I want to know what happens next.

I wish it didn't have to end but it was fun while it lasted!

Magnificent story can't wait for more please update soon.

Noooo! I seriously hope you pick the back up!

I agree that tenten is not that girly as you put it. But as a weapons expert and a ninja I believe she would always have a mirror. But hey that's just me. Mirrors can be used for signaling and many many other things.

the moment i read this last chapter i was like all dramatic darth vader yell"Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo"...but seriously i hope this gets continued it's great

I understand.

Naruto is only marrying four girls.o

On the comment about the 'kun' suffix is not used for both genders the 'kun' is actually a suffix used by females towards a male of interests, affection, admiration or honorific the same for the suffix 'chan' used by males for a female the suffix for both genders is 'san' as it is used to formally address both genders

Am a nigerian boy but dont have the appliances to make an account the names kelvin please try and complete this fic u are one of d best writters i have seen tanks

Naruto DOES get funky eyes, unless you count orange with horizontal puplies as not "funky" then there is the "crosshairs" eyes he gets with kyuubi and sage mode
then there is that NEW fucked up eye with all the beasts sealed in him PLUS sage mode!

Too true ...too true