OH God, OH God! I am crying... Good Job with the story. It's just sad that sometimes live ends in that way and it makes me cry more...but stillI loved the story! I really would Like to see those two together..
Varmilion out!

I am crying! OMG! You did an amazing work! I'm sorry for my english, I can't even explain myself at this very moment. It was awesome! Thank you! please keep going!

OMG this chapter made me cry! such a wonderful work!

I really like this story. It was so descriptive, and I'm sorry I haven't reviewed before now. I like how you did the characterizations, especially of Bluestreak and Thundercracker. They're two of my favorites, and I love how you portrayed them. I also like how you created Kate. I get the feeling that you tried to keep her from being a Mary-Sue, and you did perfectly. She was perfectly believable, and likable. And I really liked the plot as well. Heck, I liked everything about this story! And as soon as you started describing the semi and it's cargo, I knew that it was over. Sadly. But you pulled at it off really well. Some people try to kill their character and it's a wreck, but this one was really good. I honestly love this story :) thanks for writing it!

D-Rock

This is really nicely done. I love your ending note there, and how Kate says, "Where they are, they're missing you as much as you miss them."

Nicely done, 'Kay. :)

This was a very cute chapter. Favourite line in the whole thing:

"When you become your greatest enemy, then you are only bringing about your own inner destruction,"

I loved that.

Lol, I also liked the part where Blue threatened to weld TCs optics to his aft.

Could have died, there. :P

*Snickers* This was a very cute chapter, Kay. Found the odd typo, but nothing major.

I wonder what happens next?

I kid you not, I watched Brave Heart just the other night with my SO. :O

And that quote is one of my favourites: "Every man dies, but not every man really lives."

And this line of 'Bee's made me laugh.

"No, Kate. What's that? Is it a type of human card game where Jazz won't be able to cheat?" Bumblebee asked, hopeful, narrowing his blue optics at his comrade in arms.

Lol, the whole banter between him and Jazz was cute.

The scene with Kate drunk was too hilarious! Asking Blue if he wants her, gets the answer, and just rolls over and goes to sleep. Oh, gawd! XD

And I wondered if you'd had that scene with Mojo peeing on Hide in mind! As soon as he was interacting with Maggie, albeit hesitantly, I figured it had something to do with that incident. Nice touch.

I enjoyed this chapter very much. It was very light-hearted, which I imagine will complement any of the darker chapters that occurred before or will follow.

Excellent job!

Oh. My. God.

Phenomenal chapter. Really, Kay, I mean it. :O

Hmm...I wonder how Blue is going to reciprocate, though?

;)

This was really well done. I can't wait to see what happens next. I enjoyed the dialogue thoroughly, as well. TC's last line made me laugh. :P

*Sigh* Things always get so complicated...

On one hand, I understand Kate's anger; on the other, she's the twit that let the Captain lure her into the kiss, right outside Blue's quarters!

Clearly, thinking isn't something EITHER of them do well! They're both so stubborn...

They both owe each other apologies, because they were both idiots.

Good chapter, Kay. ;)

So that's what Blue was begging Ironhide to make all that time. :O A necklace!

Awwww, that was really cute.

Sometimes, the lines of right and wrong are heavily blurred. You can't really help who you fall in love with, no matter how you try.

This was a well thought-out, intriguing chapter. I'm glad they were able to fix Maggie up, and hopefully, she'll heal up nicely.

I was tearing up majorly when Kate was trying to get Maggie to a clinic. :(

I could feel the panic; you did an excellent job, there.

The earlier parts of the chapter were cute. I think Blue needs to learn a little discretion in whom he tells. What with Bumblebee being a gossip, and all. ;)

Hey Kay, sorry! I meant to read more a few days ago, but I got distracted. ;

I absolutely loved this chapter. It was so full of fluff! :D I thought it was particularly cute, how Kate said, "I'm standing next to him." And how Bluestreak did the same. :)

I do feel bad for Mike, but it really can't be helped. It makes me feel bad for Kate and Blue as well, loving and being so different...

This is really good. :)

Awww! :) They worked things out, that's so cute. _ The only errors I found had to do with a lack of punctuation; just areas that could have used commas. But, nothing big.

This is a good chapter-but still, I can't help wondering what this means for Kate and Blue. And, what about Mike?

Hmmm...