Update your story please

impressive story, i have to admit that this is a great beginning, let's see what's going to happen in chapter 2 with Kim and Ron!

Dont just stop! Pleeeease continue!

...Um...when was the last time you've been near a 12 year old? Kim's acting more like a seven year old. I use to live with my 12 year old cousin, and mind you she's as immature as a 9 year old, and she's nowhere close to as clueless as that. And she's one of those sheltered brats that barely knows a thing about the real world. Try to imagine what you were like as a preteen. Or go to that justice store at the mall until you've had enough and are about ready to kill yourself.

Ron Stoppable chosen by the Old Wizard? Cool... :)

(And nice cameo from Peter and MJ, BTW.)

really in to this tory please up date soon :)

This is a good story. Please continue. Kim and Ron forever.

this is good update soon

Great second chapter. Looking forward to the next one and where your headed with this story.

good. you kinda loseing me with the egypt stuff. hope the supernatural stuff doesnt ruin this. i like how you have kim worried. how does she react when she learns that ron been missing for 2-3 days. does she tackle him when she see him. update soon

Even if you don't know where to go with this story, you're doing a magnificent job with it so far! So keep it going!

The way the story is developing is quite endearing and entertaining at the same time. Both Kim and Ron in their pre-teens, with Kim having a more than nice life with her beloved parents while Ron has to live on his own in the streets... man, it's a masterpiece! Also, some of the other characters are making an appearance in different ways. Of course, the villains are still villains except this time they're of the cold-blodded type. Not caring if they kill MrDrP in front of Kim AND kill her, too? Wow, that's ruthless!

I bet that Ron's "training" is about to start. Maybe in the next chapter, maybe in the next one after that one? Who knows, but it's great to see that he'll make it BIG at such a tender age. Surely Kim will be there lending a helping hand or two. Plus, having to deal with a Rockwaller family as the responsibles of most of the crimes in Middleton? They already have their work cut out for them. Perhaps Officer Du will be able to do some REALLY competent work without being such a stuck-up? Nah, that would spoil everything, right? :) I hope he can get a clue or twenty from them as to how to do his job in a MUCH MORE efficient way.

Oh, and when will we get to see Shego? She's gotta appear!

This is moving along very nicely on its somewhat tilted axis. I can hardly wait to see what spin you put on next.

Ron as Captain Mavel *chuckles* it does sound like something Ron would do.

This one should be very interesting. Quite the blending of KP characters here.

So the Possible's are in trouble with the local mob boss. Figures that Bonnie would be a part of that family.

So Ron's recuperating, Kim and her dad are looking for him and a big secret is being explained to Ron.

Hope he doesn't freak.

CB73

Very interesting story please continue!