Such a good story. I think it was the first case file I've ever read and I liked the gsr mixed in. It was nice to "see" some of the sweet moments of healing between Grissom and Sara after Natalie struck.

Oh and Thanks for the sex.

Well, I liked it - longer or not. Well done.

NOOO make the fics longer! :D

Oh wow! This was a great story, glad I had the time to read it in one sitting. I was really into the investigation. Totally could have been a story on tv minus the two very steamy sex scenes. I catch myself holding my breath while I read them.. twice (okay 3Xs)... I could have passed out! This was a fantastic story begining to end. Thanks.

Nice. appropriately creepy. Well done.

Awesome!

Let me pause here to say this story is amazing! Okay onto chapter 6!

interesting case file and as always great ff.

kerstin

First off, thank you for posting this in its entirety. It is so nice to read something from start to finish, especially a case file in which you need to pay attention to the evidence.

Huge thumbs up on Grissom and Sara's relationship at work after they've been outed. You kept them completely in character and I really hope to see something like this next Season.

Wonderful work - thank you!

Terrific story with a perfect balance of case and GSR. I don't think I ever read a more perfect balance, in fact. I also enjoyed the fact that it wasn't angsty. It's nice every once in a while to read about Grissom and Sara having a really loving and relatively angst free relationship in the real world. That's how it felt to me. (Your romantic scenes and their dialogue...fabulous!)

I would have liked a final scene between Grissom and Sara rather than Greg and Bruno to wrap things up, but the way you ended it is fine as well.

Great story. Thank you for writing it and sharing it.

i loved it! truly awesome...

I really love your story and I like your view on how Grissom and Sara coped after what had happened with Sara. I can't wait to read your next story.

wonderful :) chauncey

Oh... that was great. Very emotionally satisfying. Your portrayal of the sticky situation the relationship might become was right on. (And Greg would SO be the first to snicker.)

Another great job. Thanks for brightening my Friday.

Excellent fic, I loved it!