Honestly, I was rooting for Regulus the whole time :( Now I have to go get my Regulus fix!

please add more please please please, this is a great story!

hey that was good! keep going!

lol i like this chapter

hey that was good! keep going!

that was a good chapter! keep going! at least she has slughorn though and not snape...that would suck

I like your fic so far, I'll read and review the other chapters later. _ Will you take a look at my HP fic. It's set in the maruders time as well. I only have one review, and I need to know how I'm doing.

Oh my gosh I love this story! The whole Sirius/Remus/Regulus thing is so awesome! I think Remus likes her, but I think Regulus does too. . . who will she end up with? Update soon please!

I love it!

Really good!

Great story!

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I like this. I'll read on and stuff, just wanted to tell you its really interesting and well Yeah :D:D

Haha, I love Fauna and Cassie. Lolemz :D

what did happen? that was not what i expected...

Hi,

This story has a good plot, me thinks. However, you have to work on your language and the phrasing. Oh, and the dialogue. It can get confusing at times. The golden rule is that for every new person who speaks, leave a line.

E.g.

“Make fun of you?” I scoffed.

“Don’t act dumb. So what are you going to say?” I crossed my arms and waited.

As you can see, the "Make fun of you?" part sounded like Faune was saying that because it's in the same line. The correct form would be:

"Make fun of you?"

I scoffed. "Don't act dumb. So what are you going to say?" I crossed my arms and waited.

It may seem minor, but it makes the dialogue flow more so the reader won't have to stop and figure out who's talking.

I hope this helps, and update soon.

Art :)

wow! That was unexpected! it was good though, keep going!

this is a really good story! i didnt read the other one i might later...

i feel bad for her, sirius needs to not be a retard lol