That was...really hot.

Errr...

Boris was evil for torturing Rei. Haha! But I guess that's what makes him, HIM, right? XD I'm glad you got his character well :)

That said, this is definitely one of the better lemons I've read :D

I like it! **

Gah! I am so in die-hard love with this story!

I envy your writing skills -.-

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Kitty

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This so turned me on! Could you maybe write a sequel? I always try, because I get stories and ideas in my head, but when I write it down it doesnt come out right. Loved the story (especially the luv-making XD)

LOVE, ANAH

It was good, though I think that it would have been better if you had put parts into different chapter. It seems too long. But that's just me.

The story was really good and interesting.

Can I ask if there will be or is a sequal as the last part has made me think that there may be one or that you are going to.

Pink-Angel-1992

Oh yeah, I remember reading this when I didn't have an account to review. I really like this, Neena14. This is certainly going in my favorites! And so are you. Gotta love an uke Yuriy! And Rei!

SWET! now that's hot stuff! I really loved this one ! wid the humor and submissiveness of tala and ray! n Bryan was hot! i especially enjoyed the dogs scene and nice pun by the way. while tala and kai were just pure hotness! that blindfold and the manner teaching scene was all that this story needed and then the lemons...let me say it again SWWET!

Aw Dx so cute. it's nice to read lemon story with an actual story before the actual lemon

HAHA LMAO! Man the end was good! To think you wrote that 'master piece' of yours and this as well...Are you the same person? I love this. My favourite!

Love it! So coolie! The setting, the kissing, the dancing, the part being chased by doggies! O_O; Eheh... Still, YAY BryRei! YEHEY! X3

this was really good, i liked it a lot.

*0.0* Oh, wow, that was fan-fucking-tastic! Once again you have done another excelent story. I can just see the scenes in my mind. I love BrayRei! *Cuddels couple plushie of them* They are so cute togethert! *Coughs* Anyway, now i'm over the whole fan girl thing... The story was great, I loved the lemons. And the adition of Hades at the end...*Laughs* Poor, him. He never has any fun! Any way, I shall add this story to my favorites. I forgot to mention in my message that i miss you as well. Hopefully we can talk more, since I'm no longer camping...*Shivers* I hate the outdoors, I would rather stay inside for the rest of my life. Well since this is really long, I'm going to go...Keep up the good work with your other stories.

Love,

Shiva.

Neena, did you use some of my lines for this?..I do swear you got some phrases in here, word for word from my Devil and the Deep dark ocean fic...and a hint from my Addicted...

Aside from that, this was very well written and I enjoyed it immensely. A few spelling mistakes that threw me off a tiny bit but as I am prone to mistakes to I will not criticise...

I'm sorry I can't update yet, no matter how prettily you beg, and it was pretty indeed *grins in her yaoi induced perverted way* But I'm afraid I have indulged CC quite a bit too much and now it is her turn to indulge me...

SO long but well worth the read! I loved it! *still hate Bryan though* but really loved it!

Believe me when i say that this is a masterpiece! The descroption; the lemon; the whole plot; it unfolds so smoothly.

Mind you, you don't get such fictions very often and the one I have gone through are just pure incoherent and hushed-up yaoi. Now this is awesome!

Truly your writing style and the patience for writing such long one shot amazes me! And it's rather surprising that you've written it for a friend! What a gift! LOL