*thumbs up*

You're right about Owen being out of character but like you I have also read worse this was actually pretty darn good compared to the other ones

Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$

Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$

GREAT STORY!

Oh and by the way, Ahsoka didn’t die in the the Clone Wars.

I’m guessing you wrote this before it was revealed that Ahsoka wasn’t killed

Well, Mon isn’t going to see the new era of peace

One mention: you said Breha was the queen of Naboo

Thrawn’s gonna need Anakin’s help for the outsiders though

Pieces are moving and the force will get its revenge

Why do I get the feeling Beru and Piett are going to hit it off?

Motha is an idiot

Hopefully Vader won’t kill the aunt since she’s not a heinous bitch

its a great story!

This is...strong

Ahsoka didn't die.

But lol I know u wrote this long before the final episode of "Clone Wars." But still. Grr. You didn't have to kill her off.

And Grr. I'm shocked that Anakin has forgiven and forgotten Obi-Wan betraying him by mutilating him and cruelly leaving him to die. :(