Wow, this was heartbreaking.

Very good grammar

Wow...

In less than 1,000 words you were able to deliver so much emotion and capture Sasuke's and Naruto's personalities and pain beautifully. I'm impressed. This is lovely work, and I hope to read more from you in the future.

this was an absolutely lovely piece of writing. although short, i could really feel the angst. my words arent enough justice for the fic but i really loved it!

This is absolutely beautiful. I love how you grabbed our attention with the shock factor very first sentence already, and how my heart wants to break into pieces reading about Sasuke. But then again you wrote about him and Naruto's relationship so beautifully and how he's wounds are slowly healing, so I don't know whether to grin or cry anymore :P

Thank you, this is an amazing piece of fiction. I want to read it again and again and again...!

It's not very often that I come across a well-known pairing such as this and can not only read but enjoy the piece of writing. There's an art to the speculation behind their relationship, I think, and it's rare that someone can bring that successfully into their writing. Well done!

i have read this story over and over and over again; i enjoy it every time. i think the first paragraph is my favourite. and the part in the last paragraph where you describe their angry sex as the "collateral of a relationship which had been shattered at the Valley of the End" - perfect. i think it's really /really/ in character for both Sasuke and Naruto. even (especially?) the description of Sasuke curling into Naruto like a cat into a pillow.

I thought the two separate times were both incredibly strange, but the descriptions were lovely, and I was so shocked that Naruto threw tea in Sasuke's face! That's one way to surprise someone enough to get a reaction.

aww. it was kind of sad. but completely adorable when you described all the little things sasuke does,and that's what makes naruto fall in love with him. I almost have a sense that this could actually happen in the manga! Maybe it's my inner fangirl talking but anyway ...

:)

There are a lot of things I want to say, a lot.

First not words could describe how shocked I was then I read the first paragraph, not at the sex the fact that... Well I won't ruin it for future readers but damn... A body was lying there, that's how I picture it.

Second, after the first shock I grew wary of everything else when I read so for a second I thought Sasuke was actually dead! ...Thank God I kept reading or else I would've missed out the on the ending.

Third, shit, hot tea kills. Sasuke's a man for taking it xD

I have to say this fic is quite violent and graphic, not in terms of sex but the way you've written it doesn't make it difficult to picture what you're saying. I suppose another word to describe it would be passionate.

This story is, a little bitter but still very lovely. I see what the reviews mean now.

A beautiful depiction of the mess and the truth that is them. Thank you so much for sharing that.

Totally amazing!

This sounds...exactly like them. Naruto WOULD do anything to make sure that his Sasuke was still there...and they would have sex in full view of all the ANBU because, let's face it, boys will be boys. Great job.

This was gorgeous- I loved it