Reviews for When Morning Comes
Quatermain chapter 9 . 3/31
Thank you for the enjoyable story! I really liked Clarice's course of thoughts before deciding to choose Dr. Lecter's offer of becoming more adventurous with the food. Indeed, it made sense that she could bring more good to the world outside the bureau than inside serving the ego of corrupt politicians. The story was well-paced and enjoyable. Great work!
well.scrubbed.rube chapter 1 . 5/22/2015
Loved this
Guest chapter 9 . 9/14/2013
Very nicely written. Thanks
Victoria chapter 9 . 9/24/2011
What can I say? It was really rather amazing, beauty at the utmost essence, and gracefully wonderful in every sense of the words. I enjoyed this very much and as far as I'm concern you have proven far beyond that you have a talent that brings out the inner beauty that was meant to be written.

I applaud you my dear authoress and may you be successful in your future endeavors.

As always, (again)

With a sleepy lamb & a daring wolf

May your nights be silent.

~ V
Victoria chapter 8 . 9/24/2011
Yay! I'm sparkling with happiness, trust me! This chapter was not only accelerating but also, rather riveting. Thank you so much for this tale. It was a pleasure to read this and I'm really happy on how it all worked out. -

Now, on to the last chapter.

As always,

Of course, "with some fava beans and a nice chianti."

~ V
Guest chapter 7 . 9/23/2011
As much as I wanted to skip reviewing this chapter and go to the next one, I could not. I came to realize that I am quite like the many in this generation that wants only instant gratification and there is no true value in that. After all, nothing that's fun in life comes easy.

Anywho, this chapter was really interesting. I especially liked when Clarice called to Washington and asked to talk to her boss and was told that some women was "inviting him to dinner." Ha ha ha! That's very funny. :D

Anyways, as always

With a 1, 2, 3

~ V
Victoria chapter 6 . 9/23/2011
O_O

I did not expect that.

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But I must say. . .

YOUR A GENIUS!

That was amazing and shocking and so cool and, and wow! I don't know what I could say to express how much I liked this chapter but I do know I'm excited to see the reunion between Clarice and Dr. Lecter.

As always,

Pie is yummy

~ V
Victoria chapter 5 . 9/23/2011
Yay, finally some clues where she can go meet Dr. Lecter!

I just have to say I overall LOVE this chapter! I was overwhelmed with so many emotions. And I will admit that I did cry a bit when I heard the ending to the play. :'( So sad. So beautiful!

So I was wondering though, is this a real play or something because if it is I would love to know about it. And if not, than I must, (again) YOUR AMAZING!

I really, really like it and hope to continue reading for more!

Always loved with a side of cookies

~ V
Victoria chapter 4 . 9/23/2011
Ha Ha Ha! I love how Dr. Lecter is so clever! It makes me beam with happiness. I also like how you set the entire idea of this chapter up. It seems so natural.

I can't seem to find anything that I don't like in these chapters. (not that I'm really looking) I must say that I'm impressed with the way you know how the characters may react or behave. It so in character that I could never imagine how you do it. You are truly a talented work of art!

As always,

With peaches and cream

~ V
Victoria chapter 3 . 9/23/2011
Yay, Clarice is back on the case!

I love how Clarice stood up for herself and didn't let them (The F-B-I-! Hee hee) push her around like a second rate noob. Besides, it wouldn't feel right for anyone but Clarice to be the one on the case. I believe, Clarice & Dr. Lecter are made for each other like the chinese symbol, Yin Yan are meant to be.

Anywho, it makes me smile to be in the gracing presence of your story.

With Chocolate (Yum.)

~ V
Victoria chapter 2 . 9/23/2011
You got to love the good doctor.

Anywho, I love how you made Clarice understand and have obtain some of Dr. Lecter's habits and mannerisms. It just feels right.

So, as always your amazing and I can't wait until the next chapter.

With x's and o's

~ V
Victoria chapter 1 . 9/23/2011
:D I liked it. It was very good and I absolutely love anything that has to do with Hannibal Lecter and Clarice Starling.

Although I did think that those cops interrogating Clarice were really annoying. I know there just doing there jobs but I can't help but think that they put too much of there personal feelings into it. It's just very frustrating! Not criticizing you in any way though. I just can't help but get sucked into stories when there really good and treat them as if it was happening in real life. Sorry, I'm just rambling now. Anywho, Great Story. Can't wait until I read the next chapter. -

~ V
WillowDarling chapter 5 . 9/6/2010
I find your style wonderful and your take on the two characters spot on. The plot is impeccable. Thank you so much for writing! I cant wait to read the rest of your fanfiction!
DeletedAccount30062015 chapter 7 . 7/2/2010
Firstly: great work! it's a very interesting read and I quite enjoyed it! I really do enjoy stories about hannibal.

Secondly: and don't get angry, but I could not finish this fic because;

one: your paragraphs are too long, and I don't enjoy large bundles of words meshed together; try pressing enter more it not only makes your fanfic look more visually appealing but it makes it also seem professional.

two: you need to use "" more, I find many conversations without those and it frustrates me when I find out it was actually a conversation.

I also suggest double checking, one after you finish writing then another check up the next day so you can change anything you may have liked the day before then thought twice about the next day.

All in all, great attempt and I hope you recieve more reviews.
Virgin in a brothel chapter 9 . 8/2/2009
Brightening your little world: well done!

I wasn't as fond of chapter six, however. . . on the whole it was a well planned out and beautifully crafted piece; I therefore congratulate you.

keep it up X
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