vial not vile
it kinda really pisses me off no offense
cos this a pretty good fic

I should have written this review 10 years ago when I first read The Griffin and the Dragon... sorry it’s coming so late!

This has to be one of my favourite dramione stories ever. To me it’s just as good as (if not better thanWe Learned the Sea’, so I have no idea how your story has received so few favs and reviews in comparison.

I love your plotit kept my on the edge of my seat the whole way throughand the way you characterised HermioneDraco and paced their relationship development. You also showed great skill writing the final battle sceneit was so vivid that I could clearly picture every movement.

Your writing style is effortlessengaging to read, and while there are a couple of grammatical and spelling mistakes, those are easy things to fix. You have a real talent for storytelling and I hope that you have continued writing since you wrote this.

Oh and one more thinghow could I forgethermione’s wandless magic was amazing!

it might be really late in giving the review but i swear its been a long time since a read such a damn good fanfic. can'y write more, desperate to read more . . . best of luck!

Thank you for writing. I enjoyed this story.

bloody hell Hermione you always ask questions at the worst time.

Bloody hell Hermione get the f out of there

i think its great the way you slowly are building a relationship.

I took a Wilderness First Aid class in college, and they taught us that a tourniquet was only to be used in dire circumstances. Essentially, only put a tourniquet on a limb that you are willing to chop off later. The loss of blood flow will kill that limb. Just a head's up for future reference.

That was really sweet in the end, I love your story.

I am dying here! You've combined everything I love about Harry Potter together, better yet, everyone: alive Snape, Draco and Hermione! I had to comment before I kept on reading.

Hi, just wanted to say that I've only read up to chapter six and am really enjoying the storyline and character development. A couple of minor grievances: the use of the phrase "backpeddled". You use it too often. Three time in only twice as many chapters is too much. Maybe a few times in the whole entirety would be enough. Second: the use of the word "anyways". It is never "anyways", it is always "anyway". NO "s" at the end. Also, a few grammatical errors, spelling mostly, but otherwise pretty well formulated. Will continue on this journey to see where our characters end up!

Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. Keep writing!

Brilliant!

This is so intriguing so far! I really enjoy the way you've set the story up.

what country are you from? Those Spanish translations are wicked!:)