Well, it's not as sad as In this Twilight (in my opinion), but I love chapter 8,13,9, and this 16. ,,,,,,,,and Maybe I will react as same as in my comment at In this Twilight.

That... was a funny, touching, and sad story I've ever read so far. I really enjoyed the non-lemon parts you did a great job. I felt kinda sad that Grimmjow didn't visit Orihime though. Well at least he had a chat with his son right?

OMG just love this chapter so much

I really do

You must make a story just another chapter

i am dying to know what happen to them

b(*v*)b

sorry for the mean review i wrote earlier this chapter totlly made up for it that was totally yummy jeeze im such a perv! oh well stupid nazi people urgh! well forget them and write what ever u want and i really liked your other stories:) watch foor my story i dont know the title yet but my name will be the same that was awesome! NAZIs can suck it!

hey un cool orihime dies and ulquiorra killed her WTF! then grimmjow dies sorry but that made me grumpy that is so not cool and whats with all the depression! why does everyone hate the hotties so not cool stupid ichigo kills grimmjow urgh i would kill him if i were in that show! stop killing hotties!

love it

aw I just love grimmhime!

its such a sweet pairing!

write more on this couple please.

i read some of these on your page on livejournal and i loved it!

i was surprise to find it on .

please update soon and I love you! xx

hey, really nice storie. i love this couple (and M-rated stories xD). continue soon, it's really nice! Going to fav's and alert!

ps: i don't know if u like the couple, but u write very well and have good plots for the stories, so why don't u write some aizenxhime like this one?

Renegade, I officially love you. I do.

XD

You cannot imagine how many emotions run through my body now. I am...speechless. But I'll try to put this in words.

This fic ("To Exist") is absolutely amazing.

How can a oneshot stir up so many different emotions?

It was disgusting and sickening when Aizen wanted Grimmjow to have sex with Orihime, it was hot and sexy when they were at it, it was shocking and surprising when we got the news Orihime was pregnant, it was frightening when Grimmjow threatened Orihime with a sword, it was sad when Grimmjow finally realized his love for her and "marched to his death", it was sweet when Ishida and Orihime got together, it was interesting when Sora talked to his father and it was heart-breaking when Ichigo killed Grimmjow.

Wow, that's long.

Well, the part where Grimmjow and Orihime talk for the last time, I thought, was a little bit cheesy. Lol, I don't know why.

I thought you kept Grimmjow as close to IC as possible.(Well, yeah, being a father is not something I would imagine for Grimmjow).

Man, this thing is getting long.

Overall, this fic was good. Amazing, wonderful. And I like your writing style, it's detailed but not over the top. And I did not notice any typos or grammar mistakes.

PS. Now I have to find the time to read the rest of the fics (from 1 to 15, lol).

Cheers._

OMG... This fic actually got me tears... The ending is so sad...

Your fic before is totally angst but this one is more heart breaking and hurt. But still it's a good one. Nicely done, indeed... This chapter is the best... Keep it up...

By the way, I totally agreed with Loid. About that bad ass killer sperms. Makes me laugh too...

LOVE IT...

*cries* :'( Ah... :'( That was so good, but so sad! I don't know why your sister thought that people would loose interest, I think it was amazing. Actually I wish you'd have written a bit more about Sora, but I guess you wanted to keep the focus on Grimmjow. I absolutely loved Grimmjow's character in this fic, I feel that your characters *live*, when I read your fics.

Question: although you wrote, that you wouldn't make the Little Mermaid in the way most of us think, will it still be a tragedy just as in the original tale? Please warn us, I think I'll need to prepare emotionally before reading another tragedy :'(

The biology major inside me is very angry at this story. Mostly because eggs don't even become fertilized for at least three days.

But then I remind myself that Grimmjow would probably have badass killer sperm or something. And that makes me laugh.

I liked it. It was... different.

Well, to be fair to Grimmjow he was absolutely pissed at it in your Worse Than Death story. He even attempted to get Orihime's tubes tied, but he misunderstood the situation with Ichigo and pulled her out. XD

I love both versions. One makes me really sad and the other is extremely hilarious.

i love these stories. they are great one shots. keep them going!

It's a good thing she didn't give any boy any chocolates. Grimmjow wouldn't have liked that. o_o

XD your skits. XD Run Xigbar, RUN!