Omr! This is amzing! Coming out of the closet
Or did they cum in the closet?!

Awwww so cute 3

It is so obvious that Atemu couldn't care less about Anzu. Instead the only one he cares about is Yugi, since they fucked in Anzu's coat closet. They literally just came out of the closet as the phrase goes. lol

i agree with the "screw anzu" part but not the cheating on her part. they should just say i dump you, or some crap like that.

Hehe funny

*chuckles* wow.

kekeke lol this was so funny. Omg even when they were screwing it was funny!

This pairing. My one weakness! *foams at the mouth*

This was perfect. As someone said before, very hot for as little fooling around as there was! But, what I want to say is that I still think Yugi was in character, even though he was a little mouthy in this! ;] Because, hey, in reality, we all do and say things that are unlike ourselves every once in a while, don't we? Secondly, it wasn't too out of bounds for him. I think even Yugi can get that way sometimes. It was just write. Anyway, both Yugi and Atem were written perfectly, I think.

All the elements to the story were right- the humor, the personalities, the situation. And it does help that you're a great writer, too. I applaud you for using quotes in the correct way, for it seems as though 95% of everyone on this site has no idea how to use them properly. I see this a lot: "Hi." said Yugi. I mean, WTF? What is wrong with people today? No knowledge of grammar or punctuation...

SO! I really, really enjoyed this. Thanks for the great read!

I liked this story so much that I actually read it twice. It's very nicely done, and I love how you interpreted the song.

There were so many lines in this that I absolutely adored. But, my favourite definitely was:

"They stared at each other for a long moment, considering all that they had to gain… all that they had to lose… all of the choices that now rested upon their shoulders.

Their bare shoulders.

Their bare, sweaty shoulders.

Their bare, sweaty, perfectly shaped—

"Oh fuck it." "

Made my night.

You did a great job with this!

~YukinoKara

again, yugi's an imp. i'm surprised 4kids did nothing about it, actually.

brittney

Damn, now that is a WELL written story, you have a way with words, and the humor in this little short story is perfect to not spoil the mood, or make the story corny. Brilliant, I really enjoyed reading this!

I love closets a little bit more now. Lame jokes aside, this was great!

aw, kawaii. And damn hot for as little actual messing around as there is. Well done, indeed.

I wonder how it happened in the first place. Oh well. Funny and cute story! Keep it up!