Wahh, I'd read it, but if it doesn't turn out to be Tsume married with Kisame I'd have to reread this to fix my broken heart.

Kyaaaaaaa~! Oh gawd, I'm so happy. Yes.

Oh fuck. Shit's about to go down, I can tell.

Gawd, I almost mentally murdered you when that Izuname person popped up from nowhere...Kisame x Tsume for life.

Gawds, that probably was the best you've ever wriitten. Brought me to tears.

Well, I'm feeling pumped for this next chapter~! You certainly know how to do this!

..I totally thought you were pulling my leg with authours note when that scene with Kisame and Tsume...

I shoulda known from the title...

Oh gawd, you gave me false hope! Nooooo...He kissed her and left! Selfish fish!

Awww~!

I liked this story, but at the same time, there were a lot of things that could have been improved. You had grammar mistakes throughout, there were many questions left unanswered, and Tsume could have used a little more character development. Overall, though, not bad. :D

Loving your story so far, especially kisame and tsume.
Your kisame kinda reminds me of porthos from bbc musketeers. :D

I love the 'aprentice' bit.

Was that Orochimaru in her dream

Is Tsume being like partially possessed by both Zabuza and Haku at the end?