I'm not gonna lie, this story is a bit rough around the edges and cliche. However, due to the nature of the content, it fits that it should be rough around the edges and cliche. While I would have changed some of the things here (mostly the SPaG), I loved the story for its comedic effect (my favourite part was when Naruto placed a genjutsu over the hokage monument to sing for him). Overall, great story.

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you've spelled sensei (not sensie) incorrectly with every use of the word

Oh Jesus, is this some shitty, edgelord SI fic? What the fuck is this garbage?

You story makes me shiver in excitement, and anticipation as I read it. I read to the end and came back to here to say I'm reading it again. Finally that you for this story I will also be book marking it. Have a fun lovely day.

I liked the epilogue!

this is an amazing story I love the comedy the reference the fact that haku tamari and anko are love interest this storie is definetly going in my fav list

All I can say is the story was excellent and I was laughing my ass off hrough most of story.

the dogs name is Pakkun you idiot

Somebody didn't use spellcheck...

Love the story but a mistake was made in this chapter where you said he has two hands in his mouth instead of what you meant where he has two months in his hands.

i love it! and i have only read 3 paragraphs.

Mercy, MERCY, I'm laughing so hard it hurts, hahahahahaha, hell the only way this even got typed was because I hit the speech to text button on my phone. Ninja have a chance to stop gai youth frenzy, and they go crazy on kicking any drunk persons ass, I love this chapter, I only wish there was a video of this

Kakashi graduated the academy and became a Genin at 5 became Chunin at age 6 and Jonin at age 12 Kakashi is four years younger then Obito and Rin they were 16 and both were Chunin.

J'adore de bout en bout j'aime et en plus c'est plus tôt écris
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