O.O

Well it was violently beautifully written. :D

So sad... but such a wonderful story.

Holy good god.

You're incredible. I dont know how else to put it. The imagry, the raw emotion and poetry behind every single syllable...perfection.

I almost cried, no lie.

You my friend, are fucking EPIC!

Wow this was dark but great! It seemed really unique! I hadn't given this pairing much thought, but yeah the way you have written them it turned out good.

-hugs with a kiss to the top of head- lovely, truely lovely, I loved it, ever heard of dead poetry? its where you write something so passionately that it gives people the chills.

Rabid

Road opposed to ruin the world

To whom the Bell tolls.

Ask once for pain…

Ask twice for death…

Knock! Knock! Knock!

Knocks the Reaper

Dryers Drier,

The road to Chaos

Unfolds in front of you

Choose the path…

Lest the world turn ever so slowly

Upon the wrath that is thee.

No more rice paper

Seraph Serpha

Yes I did write this myself, this is what i am able to put all of my passion into. My poetry, its very dark, and filled with my emotions. I love your work, Ill be posting my poetry up soon so please come read. When you can. (poetry will try to be posted later on today if not try looking on Saturday. It takes me a while.)

ah such a good story

Awesome! Powerful writing, an a personal favorite of my pairings, so I liked it even more. I can imagine Axel being that sort of character. Good job!

holy shit.

this was insanely beautiful, in a lovely morbid sort of way.

Hey, I liked this. :) And this fic reminds me of a song, The Last Night. O.o Neways, I like it, very angst-y suspence...-y lol, keep up the good work!

~*Nayru*~

I am completely and utterly in love with this story.

seriously.

Beautiful and fantastic. The best part was of Riku's death. The way you described in detail how he died was magnificent. Great work! Keep at it! ~thumbs-up~

VERY nice. The yaoi scene was good, and I especailly love the way you told it form Axel's POV. :P

Whoa. That was...whoa.

Whoo~

Awesomeness~ (:

You rule. Totally~ xD

I was on the edge of my seat for the whole fic! It was totally suspenseful ro something. xD

Yeeaahh. Nothing else to say. xD;;

-namikun

i cannot being to express how much i adore this.

though there were a few small grammatical errors, i was blown away by the flawless characterization and sheer amount of amazing detail.

allusion was rampant and bold and everything fit in a way that was truly a gorgeous thing to read.

nothing was out of character and, in a sick/lovely/twisted way, it was cannon. they /were/ riku and axel, just in a different world. you didn't touch a thing about them, and yet you tore them, worked them, screwed them around and make them /perfect/.

this surprised me; by the description, i did not think that this would be a beautiful and original as it is.