Awesome!

:D I forgot if I reviewed this or not BUT IT IS AWESOME! PLZ! PRETTY PLZ! UPDATE VERY SOON!

Holy Crap... Well all of that was unexpected... Can't wait to see what happens next!

Oh wow. I've read one other haunted house story besides yours and I'm glad this isn't classified under "horror" because otherwise I wouldn't have stumbled on it.

It's really good so far and it's apparent that there are several mysteries going on. One question: Why didn't Danny turn invisible whenever he was in danger of being caught?

Update soon!

Wow, we find out how the mysterious Marina died at last! Well, you've made some great chapters that I didn't review. I'm sorry about that, I have been incredibly busy. My life is to become even MORE insane the next two weeks because my play practice is going into overtime... Joy. But enough about me. NEXT CHAPPIE SOON!

Later,

~AP

Don't we already know how she died?

Wonderful chapter! Welcome back! I hadn't heard from you in ages! Glad to have you back, really.

Best of luck on the makings of the next chapter!

AWE don't make it shprt! this is SO good!

keep it up!

MaStEr/Lyllith

SWEET!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

MaStEr

omg (oh my god) this is getting really good i want to read more and more one of the best i have come across so far

Hey this story is Awesome! I have a question. I don't get the 'mommy' part. Did the father lock her up in the attic or something? Oh and random idea. Well what if how they fell asleep on the first day they never woke up, and they're still in the realistic dream, created by Marina. But all who fall asleep in the how are combined in sleep. Though when they're missing the police find them in the position the are in the dream. Like "Nightmare on Elm Street" only cotrolled by a little girl?

Wow That's long. Love it!

Roxxanne

I knew Tucker was the perfect doll! Or maybe that's just me. Creepy as always! Keep up the fantastic work!

Oh SHNAPISM! Poor Tuck... Does Marina have ghost sense?

*admires your spork* Cool! I have one from a guy who sent me a donkey instead of a burro... SPORK BATTLE!*challenges you*

Cool chapter, UPDATE SOON!

OMG... poor Tucker. And the other dolls... those are other people/children Marina trapped, aren't they...

Where is Sam when they don't know where she is? Is she the Sam doll? Why is nobody looking for Danny and Tucker? Why the time lapses, why are they there for days, what do they do the whole day, just sit around? Or is there something else going on?

I noticed something else too, their backpacks, they were missing in the beginning, but then suddenly they turn up again when Danny says his is beside his bed.

Danny can't phase through the walls... it looks like the house is playing by Marina's rules only. It's her world.

I love the idea for this story (yay for haunted houses :), I love it how you use those dolls (they're creepy), and the nursery rhyme sent shivers up my spine

I do wish you'd add a little more description, make it creepier.

Nylah

Mommy? She said only one ghost was alowed in the house. Isn't that her?