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No offensebut this chapter sucked. Athena the godess of wisdom should obviously be wise but this makes her sound like a whiny baby. Hera overreacted? My god just stop. Dont bother to continue the story :P

Great story! I loved the dialogue in all this story! Finally Athena gets someone she loves. My mission is complete! Hahaha.

Great story but, it would be more intersting if Athena had gotten wounded. With our Soldiers overseas in Iraq and Afganistan when they get back to their bases after patrols'often when they have been engaged in firefights quite a few of them come back with scratches and eye problems.

I really love the story so far. I was wondering if you would mind if I tried my own hand at a biography like yours. Of course it would be completely different. I wouldn't use any of your made up characters.

allright, when's troy?

another thing: apollo is bi. please. i also got a bit of a feeling that athena might be a lesbian when i last read the Illyad. however, apollo did have a male lover.

I loved this whole story. It took me a great amount of time to read it. If you are going to write another like this I would go with Demeter.

quit writng for fanfiction. publish this. this is good, and i would much rather see this as a book.

Amazing story, it's like nothing I have ever read. Fantastic!

I read until 21and came back to see if there was any updates, so nice surprise reading 22.. The last part of this was so lol,but shouldn't the word be 'Veiled'?

Really good one, I like the interactions between the various gods, the rivalry and the plays of passion. And Athena's got a bf - that's the best of it all!

Wow - what a battle! I'm impressed! Go Athena!

Now we're rocking!

I really enjoyed this story, nicely written. I would love to read about Artemis. Please write one about is my favorite Goddess!

Thank You,

Nike

Some great action in here, keep it up! & I like how you describe the characters.