Reviews for Broken Cogs
Gwydion chapter 1 . 6/19
This got several genuine laughs out of me, and I assure you I do not genuinely laugh easily! I love the frenetic writing style with things being repeated and people talking over each other. It really felt like a conversation between friends. It was funny and cute and just the right mood after a long day. Really enjoyed it!
NarutoAdmirer21 chapter 1 . 8/1/2017
Hahahaha!
This is so cute!
And adorable!
And well written!
Now I've got this grin on my face!
I absolutely love this!
But I feel so sorry for Sakura!
Having to deal with them!
Hahahaha!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/25/2016
THIS WAS THE BEST
Orange3WhiteSkew chapter 1 . 5/31/2014
*grin* They made that a lot more painful process than they had to.
chocovic-chu chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
Hillarious! XB
Kiku-Goldenflower chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
Can't stop laughing
SH4RiNG4N chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
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ChronoMitsurugi chapter 1 . 11/10/2011
Punch-drunk. So he has memory problems because Sakura keeps hitting him.

So, Sakura needs to die. Yeah, death to Sakura. You know, while we are having an execution, why not kill Hinata and Jiraiya too. Those three are the characters I hate the most.

Anyway, ignoring my problems, great one-shot. Very entertaining. Two thumbs up.

-Chrono
anon chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
awwww :) that was a really nice read
JlovesGaara chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
Aahahah this was funny as hell. I KNEW that all of Sakura's and Tsunade's blows to Naruto's head would leave some damage. If I were Naruto, this would have ended much darker. I would have freakin punched Sakura so hard in the face as payback. ahaha. Good little fic.
fAteD lOvE chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
Ahaha poor adorable Naruto! :)
katsekala chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
It was very funny! Many kisses!
Ani Moussa chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
This story is fantastic! I love it when Sasuke convinces Naruto that he has 'cogs' and he managed to break them. Poor Naruto was freaking out!
PoppyxHatake chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
oh my god!

i couldn't stop laughing!

its a great one! loved it!

p.s i don't know what else to write!

ja na!
creepy crab chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
"I have chrontolic elephantitis pathetamanamy?"

Sasuke was soooo not helping the siituation. XD
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