Reviews for Manipulating Fate
AliceBridger chapter 31 . 7/26
YOU PROMISED!
Goodness, this is a damn great story. I suppose begging for another chapter would be futile, wouldn't it?
Well, I'll try anyway. Pleeeaaaseee!
rigger42 chapter 5 . 6/13
I'm hoping he forfeits the relationship and maybe some of the friendships change because...he's 30
Azure Shine chapter 4 . 6/4
aww i wish harry be kind to kreacher and kreacher too. he is my fav character. i know kreacher in canon but hope it kreacher after he is become good elf, well, it okay for ooc too at last kreacher not be bashing/hurting with action or verbal
Midknight85 chapter 3 . 5/25
This seems like a very good story and I truly hope that you have a chance to finish it as soon as you can.
Peace
adriana.schroor chapter 23 . 5/24
Hello,

I am dutch and i think you wanted to talk about 'balans' and not 'saldo' as saldo is used in finances and not as in balance of good and evil. I just wanted to point this out to you, and if i'm wrong you van ignore this.
Guest chapter 31 . 4/13
You know I just recently read this book and I would urge you to continue writing, no pressure at all, but it is a really good book. I think it is like the best book I have read and it is a shame you stopped writing it. Though, it was published and updated a long time ago... Best of luck in what you decide to do. Sorry if this message is offensive... :D
Maheshvara10 chapter 31 . 3/6
This is One of the best Harry potter fanfiction I ever read. Thank you author. I hope you update this story.
Goddess of Darkness and Misery chapter 31 . 1/12
Hi! I love this story. If it is possible, please update soon.
Guest chapter 5 . 11/17/2019
Yikes. This is such unbelievably naive writing.
Guest chapter 5 . 11/13/2019
Why didn't Fabian reveal himself to his family at least when voldy vaniahed?
Bronze chapter 11 . 11/2/2019
Wonderful! Though, personally, I see Fumblemort as darker than Riddle ever thought to be. Just look at everything he did to Harry personally! Then in first year alone, he brings the Philosophers' Stone into the school! A school for god's sake! As for the traps, WHAT A JOKE! No, the man's so dark he makes Riddle look like the lightest light wizard to ever exist!
Bronze chapter 9 . 11/2/2019
Please, I don't mean to sound snotty but you made a slight mistake with a phrase in this chapter. Fabian is either a PROBLEM-SOLVER OR TROUBLE-SHOOTER. To the best of my knowledge, there is no such thing as a PROBLEM-SHOOTER. Also, I'm totally enjoying this story.
tammgrogan chapter 11 . 10/28/2019
Hello, I just wanted to tell you how very much I am enjoying reading your Wonderful story. I see that the story is not finished, that is the bad part about reading fanfiction so many stories are never finished. Hopefully one day you can come back and finish writing this one. Until then Thank you so much for sharing it with all of us, and Take care.
Guest chapter 31 . 10/13/2019
This is so good and unfortunately like all great fanfictions it will never be completed... why is that?
Do good Author's have a secret society and get together to write great stories and don't complete them
99% of completed stories suck and 100% of the really good ones are abandoned! Hope you read this one day and leave that secret society and finish this story
Nit picker chapter 5 . 8/19/2019
So sorry beautiful story, and I’m like over 10 years late... but ‘downtown’ London isn’t called downtown. There is Central London and with in the centre the City which is a finance business bit. Old victorian factory’s would/could have been 6/7 stories high- and had fire places inside- also 16 stories would draw a lot of attention in the 90s I think although not sure. Very sorry- nit picking is not nice- but kind of assumed you’re American or at least not from London? Extra apologies if that is incorrect. Anyhow love the story and that Fabian is alive never seen anyone else do that in fanfic world :)
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