Reviews for Fist of the Moon
setokayba2n chapter 18 . 1/17
I guess that the outer Senshi and Happosai are not important in the story and there will be no sequel?

Leaving that aside, good fic, I liked it
NegaDruid chapter 18 . 7/5/2019
Aaah, that was one of the better Ranma/Sailor Moon fanfics I've ever read. Very satisfying! Especially the ending! So deeply enjoyable! Thank you for writing it!
Destrark chapter 1 . 4/14/2019
Okay, my main problem with this is why hasn't Nodoka chopped his head off yet for quite blatantly not being a 'manly-man'. If you'd written a resolution in this chapter about that then it would be fine. Otherwise I hope that confrontation comes extremely soon. Because it would definitely be a shorter period than 3 months for Ranma and Nodoka to see each other and Nodoka to get a hint at whats happening unless Ranma is hiding it from her.
Hishin Trueflame chapter 1 . 7/9/2017
I know its an old fic and all that but the more i read the more i thought "Who are these people?" cause they sure as hell are not the cast of Ranma 1/2, I agree that Ranma does enjoy being a girl often but what i saw here is not balance, its overcompensating.
So because Ranma is extremely male as a guy she should be extremely girly as a girl? I cannot agree with that.
By the way, the reason he's a jerk most of the time has nothing to do with his gender but with the way Genma trained him for his entire early life, since before he can remember, he's been trained to make opponents furious by insulting them in a fight.
If since before you were little you'd have been trained to insult people at the drop of an hat, i assure you would be just as much of a jerk as Ranma is, gender has literally nothing to do with it.
The Prophet Of Lies chapter 5 . 11/21/2016
I liked the way it started but I am having an issue with the ranma crew no one important is the same. Ranma even locked as a girl is perfectly lady like and never goes cocky not even going over the rest but it was a good read.
SentinelPrimeKnightOfCybertron chapter 17 . 9/25/2016
How far can Pluto be trusted? Last chapter rang a number of alarm bells, when Endymion was confirmed to have a relationship with Pluto. MangaPluto had a very much unrequited love for King Endymion. To what extent has Pluto's meddling been for the greater good vs her own selfish interests? We have only her word to go on in regards to the original timeline. Did she see Endymion as a reward for her millennia of service and acted to eradicate his relationship with Serenity, justifying it by other factors that may not have been as bad as she claims? We have no alternate evidence for any of what she says. I definitely find it rather fishy whenever Setsuna meddles with time because she's NOT supposed to do that in the original canon and especially if we only have her word to go on. I love Pluto as a character but nobody would trust one person with that kind of power.
tacaloking chapter 3 . 3/16/2016
this was one of the first storys i read i think i came across it a year or so after you finished writing this i reread this so many times i lost track i think this was the first story i read that had ranma locked in his curse form i also read am i smart i love both storys and i love them every time i read them it brings me back to my teen years and how fanfiction was one of the few things in my life at the time and this story i enjoyed reading allot in my teens and even the i have read hundreds of fanfiction i still find myself going back to this around once a year
Guest chapter 1 . 12/31/2015
Why is it homophobic to get distressed at the thought of kissing someone of the same sex in a romantic way? Would it be heterophobic for a gay person to react that way to kissing someone of the opposite sex romantically? Of course not. We would recognize it as unfair to put them in that situation, to try to make them do something that runs counter to who they are. It doesn't mean the person is prejudiced; it just means they're human.
deanron chapter 14 . 12/18/2015
deathgeonous chapter 1 . 11/21/2015
I decided to reread some old Ranma favorites, like this one. Well, thanks for writing this, and bye for now.
Indecisive Bob chapter 18 . 9/11/2015
Nice story! I don't really know much about the Sailor Moon story line, so thank you very much for that short summary in Setsuna's letter of what was changed in this story. Thanks for writing and sharing this story!
maryjane5000 chapter 18 . 6/3/2015
First of all I'm torn because 1/2 of me thinks that (1) the locking (2) the depression/sulking & (3) the confrontation should have been expanded a little more &/or happen a little later then thy did but the other 1/2 thinks it was well done

In Ch 8: I wish you had Ranma pick up both Nabiki & Usagi (or have Ranma & Akane each pick up either Nabiki & Usagi) to pet them. I also thought Ranma should have pulled a Nabiki maybe something like

"You want to change back? That will be 50¥, sis"

Aside from those this is excellently done but needs a sequal
Arion Kagano chapter 5 . 6/2/2015
I have just discovered this fic and am finding it fascinating so far. That said, your characterization of Mamoru surprised me at first. Sadly, however, when it comes to the original anime I can't say with certainty that you are wrong. I've never interpreted him that way before, but it is pretty clear he's not really interested in her until the past life thing and he is a bit of a jerk at first. Your interpretation is different but makes you think. And also once again reminds me how the original anime is inferior to the manga in some ways, the romance being primary. I'm just glad you are basing it on the original anime because I would have had more trouble accepting that interpretation of manga or crystal mamoru who genuinely cares about Usagi before they remember their past lives.
Faraway-R chapter 15 . 3/27/2015
And so it ends, more or less.
Faraway-R chapter 12 . 3/27/2015
Oh... Only just after Marzipan fight figured out.

Mamoron - MamoruMoron...
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