Reviews for Dancing with the enemy |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hm, that was allmost an "normal" story in contrast to you fics on AFF. Well, nice written, and you haven't forgotten on Ron, too. However, I hope you continue your fics on AFF, what assumedly is wishful wanted by most of you loyal fans - and of course me, too. Bye Sparksman |
![]() ![]() ![]() i enjoyed reading it. good one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm...I would have gone back in time and met Oprah, become best friends with her. Then I would persuade Oprah to make Kim and Shego fall in love. Or, rather, make them realize that they're in love. They would, of course, listen to her. Because, seriously...when OPRAH tells you that you're meant for someone...you listen. Haha. That way, Kim and Shego would be together AND I would be rich. Because everyone knows that when you're a friend of Oprah...you're a friend of money. She gives away cash like the characters in RENT spread AIDS. Oh. Wow. That was a slightly distasteful joke...heh. I enjoyed the fic. Just, for a future reference, you might want to double space between paragraphs and with character dialogues. It can get a little bunched up. P Just letting you know. But I enjoyed it. A cute concept. Kudos. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so crazy that it just might work. Now, how do we get Wade hooked up with Adrena Lynn? Is this story being continued? Kim goes off to college and slowly develops her relationship with Shego while Ron and Yori train with the Monkey Monks. Then in a few years they all come back to Middleton and get to work saving the world. They quickly realize that saving the world would be simpler if they controlled it. So, to save the world, the four of them take over the world. Yeah, it could happen. |
![]() ![]() ![]() you've written an incredible story. i am so glad you changed the ending instead of that sucky predictable ending the disney movie had |
![]() ![]() ![]() For anyone who doesn't like lesbians: |
![]() ![]() You are so pathetic |