make another chapter

Dreamland is one of my all time favorite books: I swear if this doesn't get updated, I don't know what I'll do with myself

Wonderful! You added so much emotion to it!

Omg... This story is just A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!

this is really good

i am scare for caitlin

pretty good but a sort of unrealistic. if you read the end of dreamland than this doesnt really fit but if you chose to ignore it then its okay. keep writing you have a good mood in your writing style. best of luck.

-jessi

i liked this chapter :D

-TF95

oo really good! im glad you updated! do it again soon please!

this is great update soon

omg. woah.

love your story.

really good story! update soon please!

okay, woww.

honestly, i totally believed everythign you wrote because that's what i feel like really happened to caitlin. and i've read a lot of fanfiction stories and ive never believed anything like this one before. amazing job and i really do hope that you write more :) also, i like how short the chapters are. they're just to the point and not like, long long paragraph of pointless detail which just kind of ruins the story sometimes. so, great job and i really do hope that you write more! :)

You're really good at confusing the hell out of a reader (emotionally... mainly) but you do it in a way that it's possible to relate to the character. Anyways, good job.

Oh my gosh, wasn't expecting that, loved it (in a bad way... if that's possible).