I absolutely adore how you weave slashy stuff so closely into the already existing text.

"And in his mind, Rosencrantz replies, “I would kiss you back, of course,” as if there’s no other reasonable possibility." That made me smile, in such a fan-girly way. You have such a way with this fandom... I love your pieces, and this is really especially lovely; all the tension in Guil juxtaposed to the simple understanding and acceptance of Ros... Just as Stoppard would have agreed, if his Ros and Guil had traipsed this way.

Hm, just that tiny bit of added info totally changes this whole scene.