This story was amazing! One of my favorites for the pairing!

Just finished my second re-read, and wow, what a fantastic story! There is so much to say about how great this is!

Firstly, the characters were spot on. Their quirks, dialogue, reactions—everyone was perfectly in character.

I also loved how you wrote the group dynamics. Raven and Star’s girl talk, Robin and Cyborg’s side conversations, etc. Those little moments between characters were wonderful to read.

But by far, my favourite part about it was the realism of their relationship. Friends to lovers doesn’t happen overnight, and being in a relationship is messy. You portrayed all of their benchmark moments in a way that was genuine and believable.

I’m happy to see that you’re currently working on the sequel. I’m excited to catch up and be along for the ride! Thank you for writing this

Huh, this was really cute and yet pleasantly mature. A solid sense of slice of life with some superhero shenanigans. Mike was a cool villain, a "bad guy" who wasn't a bad guy with simple powers and simple goals. Shockingly reasonable to be honest lol. All in all, a good read, nice work!

Alrighty, there's a lot to unpack for the tail end of this story.

The characters continue to interact in a very organic way. You have a great ability to use words other than "said" and "asked" to make conversations flow with characters' actions. People are pretty in-character for the most part. It established credibility and buy-in from the reader-especially important since their romance progresses slowly and requires the reader to wait for delayed gratification.

I especially liked the way Robin, Cyborg, and Starfire reacted to Beast Boy and Raven's developing relationship. At times they mocked it, and at times they were perplexed. Those scenes always strengthened the relationships between those characters. I will say that it was sometimes apparent that you were favoring Beast Boy and Raven over the others. Small details gave that away. For example, you started referring to Beast Boy by "Garfield" and then "Gar" (and Raven became "Rae") but the others never became "Dick", "Koriand'r", and "Victor".

Mike remained perplexing to me. Did he represent some kind of plot force? He definitely had a distinct personality, and you went out of your way to paint him as a decent person despite the trouble he gave the Titans. Maybe he represents the idea that facing a challenge together is more important than overcoming it, and that a force that challenges you is not necessarily a bad thing. Kind of like the shape-shifting creature that the Titans chased in "Things Change".

I'm excited to read the sequel story. This is definitely motivating me to get back in the game!

Me encantó. Esto fue absolutamente hermoso. La relación entre BB & Raven floreció un poco apresurado a mi parecer, aun que claro viviendo varios años juntos tuvo que facilitar las cosas... Me hubiera gustado ver esa charla que tuvieron en su primera cita, tengo curiosidad del que hablaron para armonizar el ambiente y que todo continuara. Pero todo me gustó. Gracias por escribir esta linda y romántica historia.

cute

I should really be sleeping right now but I'm content in staying up late since it meant I could binge this. Great stuff really

Top marks. Good story.

8D Oh wow!

From the moment this story began I loved it so much.

And now to see it end, it's like the end of an era for me which is kind of sad.

I love this story, and I'll definately read it over and over.

:-) Thank you so much for writing it.

Great finish. Loved this story in its original form and was excited to see it’s continuation. The add-on didn’t disappoint either. Hope to see more of your work, cheers.

Great job on this fun story!

Well, you did it. You avoided the pitfalls of continuing a finished story that so many others, including professionals, have suffered. Instead, you gave us a second phase of this story that was easily worthy of the first. Impressive, and well done.

Mike's escape does leave an opening for a third phase, but it doesn't seem necessary, especially after the epilogue.

I don't want this to be the end!

This has been a GREAT story. The creative interaction between the characters were witty. The back and forward between Garfield and Raven was funny. But I am sorry to see this story end. I hope the writer will reconsider and continue the story. It's to good to stop.

I hate to see the story end. I thoroughly enjoyed each and every chapter. Thank you for all of your work to finish this very well written tale.