Reviews for Kira First
turtlequeen2 chapter 1 . 6/17/2007
O.o...Look, I'm finally branching off and reviewing your other stuff! rofl.

I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, Death Note! Of course, Inuyasha is always my number one fave...XD

Anyways...enough of my ramblings. I'm just so happy that you like this series as well as the couple Misa/Light. I actually thought that this would have worked too. I actually even started a one-shot on them too! XD...it just...never finished...

I think that you got both of their characters down perfectly! Of course, that's just my opinion. As usual, your descriptions and wording are superb. I love Misa and her pouting ways.

I like Light a lot, but the only thing I dislike about his character is how he uses Misa...But, hey, he has to do something like that since he is Kira. lol. Making Misa have a baby is a nice twist as well. Though the one-shot was short, it was well worth the read.

I hope to read more Misa/Light works from you! And if I ever publish Death Note works, I hope that you could read them! I'd actually be honored if you did! And as the reviewer said before me, I love that last paragraph quote. Perfect for those two. XD
asdf42 chapter 1 . 6/11/2007
Hi!

I like your story, is fantastic, this quote "He could have loved her. He could have truly loved her. If she had not loved Kira first" is excelent, congrat for your write