This is a great story! I'd never thought of them as a couple but you made it very good.

Well for once that lil rat managed to prank the great James Potter, with some rather unexpected results. I often wonder what drove Peter to ol Toms camp.

Well anyway this was a well done story.

:)

wow

that was really good

i loved how peter got revenge on james

Oh man is this story good! This is great!

Oh, wow! You are an amazing author! Seriously, you should take that up as a job when the time comes XD I'll read all your novels!

AWH! That was genuinely excellent...there's something so real about the way you write, your details and the little scenes you describe..I can't really explain it too well but whatever, well done and thanks! I heart Sirius/Lily, to find a truly well-written one is a rare delight ;)

omg, utterly scandalous. i thought they were just gonna have that one kiss, but then...u made it all the more believable by writing in lily's thought that she couldn't believe what she was suggesting. it made it seem like it actually could have happened! it did make me think less of lily though; sirius too, but she is supposed to be the loyal girlfriend, and she kinda started it. oh, i also liked the humor in the beginning of the chapter.

great descriptions and characters in this story! you're a great writer! i loved it!

Can't say I'm a fan of Lily/Sirius, but i really enjoyed this fic. Not to mention, it made me laugh.