Wonderful concept, I do wish chapters were longer and more emotionally driven. But I am happy with what you have.

Please update soon. I sure hope Usagi-chan will overcome this and the future will return to normal somehow.

i will join your forum if you update this awesome story's all of it!

GOD! RINI REALLY, REALLY, REALLY NEEDS 2 COME BACK NOW! PLZ UPDATE SOON!

Really great so far, even though it's so very sad and heart-breaking. Keep up the good work and please, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

a lil confused but its so sad :(

I don't quite get it, why did the silver crystal die? What's happening?

Wow, goes to show, just how just one thing can affect the entire future.

It's a sad story, really. But I like it.

Omg update SOON!Its so Sad That Rini Dies...PLEASE PLEASE PLEASSE UPDATE SOON!

this is soo! sad { PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON!

Wow, this was such a sad chapter. Poor Serena, not onl did she lose her future and her daughter, but her ability to transform. This really bites, but I'm interested to know what will happen next. Keep up the good work and PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Wow, this is a pretty heavy beginning you got going here. It's just so sad and depressing I don't know what to think. But despite that fact, I really do like your story so far and I admire you for starting out with such a sad event and it makes me wonder what you have in store for the rest of your story. Your chapters may be short, but they are very interesting and are enough to keep me wanting more. I look forward to your next installment. Keep up the good work and PLEASE UPDATE SOON! _

Why did the future change? Unless Serena and Darien don't get together in the future, Rini should still be born in a couple of years. Either her or a new child

Please continue this story... I know you probably want more reviews but that's no reason to silence the muse! Please continue... *gives Rini's chibi eyes*

aw...more plz hopefully a lil longer though:P but i'll take what i can get :P