Reviews for Object Lesson |
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TheUnkownUser chapter 10 . 6/8 11 years later ... It really is the ultimate wait lmao. Feels like I'm waiting for The Incredibles 2. Seriously though, if you can and want to continue the story, it would very much appreciated. |
IzukuMeliodas2 chapter 1 . 6/6 Pretty decent overall. Just cut the swearing, this is based on a kids show so it feels really out of place |
Guest chapter 10 . 4/25 Please, I beg you. Continue this story. |
Teehee chapter 1 . 12/7/2017 When a story hasnt been updated in almost 10 years. Wow. |
kabs9000 chapter 1 . 3/30/2016 seems interesting |
Whyhow chapter 4 . 5/6/2015 The excessive swearing seems out of character for everyone. Other than that, this chapter seems good, and I am glad to have a better idea of what exactly is going on. |
Whyhow chapter 3 . 5/6/2015 Very well written fight scenes, but surely one of them is more sensible than that. |
Whyhow chapter 2 . 5/6/2015 You're really good at writing for Azula. I almost believed her without looking over the conversation again. Although what she said has some basis that wasn't discussed (Toph has been bending significantly longer than Katara (skillfully, anyway), had teachers closer to the root of the knowledge with who knows how long to improve their skills, and had probably the best possible motivation to learn well), but it also makes perfect sense as a way to gain trust while simultaneously starting to create rifts in the group. |
kostigan chapter 10 . 2/17/2015 Still waiting for that next chapter. :-) |
Yoholic chapter 2 . 10/4/2014 Azula, the snake in the grass |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/28/2014 It's pretty bittersweet to be done reading a story I came into knowing it was abandoned. I usually avoid stories that haven't updated in the last 6 months at the very least (and only because there is no 3 month choice in the FF search) like plague. But knowing the premise got me to start reading it - and the amount of enjoyment I got from it kept me reading until the latest chapter. Great story, I loved it, wish there would be more, etc, etc. |
moosejuice5 chapter 10 . 3/20/2014 kinda good, but it needs more |
InsanityRunsInMyBlood chapter 10 . 4/20/2013 AMAZING! Simply amazing! I love this and how you portray Azula! I really hope she gets an adequate ending, at least. What pairings do you have in mind, or is this going to stay non-romantic? |
Ecomadness chapter 10 . 12/5/2012 Really awesome story saddend u abandoned it tho hope u update it someday. |
LadyBluePhoenix chapter 3 . 10/26/2012 I love Aang and Azula interactions. I hope you update soon. This is GREAT! |