I am only glad that this is old and there is a second part:-)

The ending...my goodness whyyyyyy?! :'( I like the idea of this story but god dang it Aang, all you had to do was turn around and look at her to know how she really feels.

It was perfect! Now all you need to do is write the next chapter!

Brillant. :) I loved it. Written well. I really enjoyed it. :) I hope to see more stories written by you in the future. Keep up the great work.

~balseirocharmed

Oh, wow! That was so in character! And i love how Katara was flustered and she began to speak really fast... it just seemed like something she'd do. :P And awr! The ending... so sad... :( Both crying for each other.

I loved it, no matter how sad it was. -.-"

xx Boat xx

for a first time kataang writer that was great.i really liked you could even consider doing that same story over again but this time it could be from kataras point of view.

yours truly katarainlove(with aang)a kataang worshiper

i loved that a first it was really good.i swear i was holding back tears at the end. i know it sounds silly but kataang is my you could make a secual to seemed to me that they both wanted to say somthing else to each a connfecion secual would be a good idea.

yours truly katarainlove

that was so cool. keep writing

good story

Nice job. I love Kataang stories, and hereby classify it as partial aangst (spelled because Aangy's in it!). Poor K and A, so sad, especially Aang.

That was so sad. I love your writing style.

tension! that was one awesome fic, and I will read the follow-up! I really like how you word things like "the words were left to float off into the air and die." Although one thing I would like to point out, Katara's eyes are brown, not blue.

Yay! I liked it! It's so depressing... How could you?

Well, anyway, I HATE when that happens to people. Miscommunication. Romeo and Juliet died of it! It makes for a great story!

nice, i hopw you write more, i especially liked the way you presented the end of this chapter, it was... very original, and suited the mood perfectly.

KEEP IT UP, LOL!

This was really good, as I think you can tell by the reviews you've received so far. I really felt sorry for poor Aang, and I think you described his feelings and reactions very well. Delightfully awkward at many points, and I particularly enjoyed the babbling. I know from experience how hard that can be to write. Nice work!