Reviews for Wolfsong
Debbie Hicks chapter 31 . 4/30
32. Epilouge 2
Bella's pov
suddenly Bitten but three wiyth best riends with two suddenly marked then with Alien VCenom too late Swallowed blod human blood to Aliens/aVVulcans slipped lost Cotrol the guard found me drinkig blood Isabella careged with murdr aee punished who turned you then myself was Speaking By Quiletute treaty law signed Stay from the treaty Line Leave the Almighty United States of America I Am warning you by my Alpha Female VOICE ! you die Three Freaks tore from here Executed with Him/Bitten three with Immortal Children good who turned her/these newborns get her/him/they chained from here from the Necks Head-Cord they with others bitten Snapped but tore apart with Him my imprint/they Both then lost blood human blood was With Alien Venom then Nothingness brought there good slaughtering them Masters she has Mated with a Vampire imprinted on him with them bitten has Alien Venom is dead with them turned by herself broken both ;laws write a letter please good then Execution of the both then Carllisle found me dying from it with they blew up with his wife/others With they with they Chained with him/myself Nothingness Punished as Cullen tore from both Severing from here then caused Both brought there good these ones with her/him/they broken the law but they have stopped these Vampires by herself/they then With others each both Lost too much many mostly as all of the blood supply was toxic waste more of blood and all of the sudden Was nuked more of Volturi guards bitten freely blew up wee blacken veins officially burst freely what they are With their looks/names/powers then Remove them tpoo late myself underwent a alien dramatic change hads a very massive headache then was Self-Defensivse mental and Physical Shielding them hair woith stylish chic bangs fly9ing held my ward saying from a house You'r Sushi was glowing more was wearing my heavenly but angelic Snow-White Martian robes was with Vulcanoid Werewolf's teenaged Ocampan ears were Pointed had Richer More Sch'n T'Gai Eyebrows were Slanted body/face was oiled/massaged as all of it the four thin unisex with white Martin robes was wearing Vulcan religious temple Seleyan jewelry hair and neck hands was in fact a ordained Vulcan Priestess gasp what is she wearing robes what is she a Vulcan female mated with a Terran male oh my god her eyes are Darken Brown-Black irises she is meditating has a icy calm look what you attain Kolinahr what you follow Surak she's Immortal in time myself was a ordained Acolyte of Gol Vulcan priestess swearing Holy Religious oaths of Celibacy Sir! she's not married has a Vampire executor for a mate where's Irene and Richard Richard entered Pon'farr it's rare he's in heat for his wife oh my god you a Chaplan yes trained by one ordained me as a priestess I Formally married them in Native American robes the others had eight then in a cloistered room Richard had became Intimate with Irene his wife their kissing started were in love with each other then Thrusted inside her then began Moving into her then suddenly violently officially Bred on her then suddenly the Romance love started while in their merged fifteen blown up as a Unicat things were stored as all of it Suddenly Strom could not rest or meditate grumbling Strom she did married them off is a trained chaplan I Can't sleep of them mating like us crap then too late Richard was Still Moving inside her then suddenly Releasing Semen/sperm began barking like Puppies then their Mating Ceremony began moans of her was louder than normal oh no they are Breeding like us oh my god Richard is perfect for her and you set them up moi then Bitten her during mating it really happened Irene's mated scream was heard jolted her father a Shaman out of bed Pregnant with 8 kids then too late Irene was with child herself was more emotional but tired from the birth of her kids growing well but healthy Congraduations Richard your wife is pregnant he fainted in his robes on loan oh my god Pack I Am going to be a Father then in time my godchildren were born aged to be kids were louder but noisiest loved Outdoors and insects ugh not Bugs Bella you are also a midwife trained by their mother in Brown Vulcan robes gasp they know of her heritage ew gross a girl belch boys will be boys.
Debbie Hicks chapter 31 . 6/14/2018
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Kushka chapter 31 . 11/21/2017
Good
Guest chapter 29 . 6/12/2016
This is one of my most favorite scenes in this story
Anne Celeste chapter 1 . 3/13/2014
There is such a thing as female werewolves,,leah in the series was a wolf...so far,the story is okay,will be able to determine if its realy good after a few chapters
chalupa67 chapter 6 . 11/24/2012
That was a little harsh.
Niamh c chapter 31 . 9/4/2012
I know that you probably don't look at the reviews for wolfsong anymore BUT I would like to say I LOVE IT do entertaining and I like how you ended the story not just ditching the story I'm very VERY happy that you finished it. I love twilight fan fiction, I read them every day. This is one of the best EVER! I am very inspired by people who write I think it's amazing how you think of ideas, I LOVE the draw and this have inspered me to draw a wolf and a pack. That was my long way of saying I LOVE THIS !
InuFan21497 chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
Please keep upsating or make a second part!
OperaGrrrl chapter 3 . 2/26/2011
Is this a Edward & Bella story? If it is, shouldn't she have imprinted on him by now?
TwilightxMusicLuver chapter 1 . 1/11/2011
i think u might wanna change your sentence to vampires are our immortal enemy ;)
iLovePun chapter 6 . 10/23/2010
Hey, I'm not going to leave an "update soon" but I'd like to tell you that some people leave a review like that as an encouragement. Also, sometimes people just don't have the energy to write a constructive review, that's usually me. But I'd like to ask how there are wolves in your story already when, in the book, the wolves only came along because there "gene" was triggered by the presence of vampires (the Cullens)? I haven't read your whole story yet so I'll be waiting for a subtle explination somewhere in the rest of what I read.
Ms. Kaylea chapter 31 . 8/21/2010
Great story!
belllovesedward chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
love
winterqween chapter 31 . 10/18/2009
hey, great story! i loved it! can't wait for the next one!

is mike and jess and the rest going to be at school when they go back? what does the rest of the school think about the constant rivalry and unusual comraderie between the cullen's and the pack? does charlie ever find out or will you keep him clueless still?

i will have more questions in the future, as the next story progresses.
LuxAngelFallen023 chapter 25 . 9/10/2009
Your realy good at drawing and love the story
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