Love this little tale! The characterizations are spot on. Lovely. DenymBear

Lovely job!

Whoa...! That was one great piece of writing. So glad that, no matter how things go down (and it may be all the turtles going down), they do it together - brothers to the end. "All of us leave. Or none of us do. We don't leave our brother behind. Ever." That says it all for me. Love the Turtles and their loyalty and love for each other. Do or die, but it's done together.

GREAT STORY!

Oooooh I like

I have never screamed and flailed so much during a story. That I can remember at least. This entire thing drove me wild and I was on edge to thievery end and the ending left me cheering out, "yeah kick their butts!" And I really just FELT for Leo, being made to make that choice but I get his reasoning behind the choice he made. I get why he chose Mikey and not Raph. I mean for one thing if Mikey had been let out for even five seconds there's no way they could've held him. Also Raph is the power house and considering how out numbered they were they really needed that anger. And finally Mikey is their little bro so their over protective big brother instincts would've been blaring like crazy. But having to make that decision, even after planning it all out in his head and seeing that betrayed look on Mikey's face, god poor Leo. Oh man this story has given me so many emotions. I mean seriously, Mikey is crafty as nobodies buisiness but when they're up against larger numbers Raph is better suited for that kind of thing while Mikey, of you put him in an open kind of place he will be all over the place and take you down before you can touch him, he's definitely their most clever fighter. But here they needed raw muscle and power not cleverness and agility, and they needed the extra bit of cluster of "that's our little brother" to really make them go for it. Raph was a better choice. But still! God that must've killed Leo. Oh my god I can't, the emotions. I'm dying.

Poor Mikey! I love him so much! You go Raph! Save Mikey! :D

gripping and emotional. To the point and exact. Fantastic job! Loved every word!

Damn right you don't leave your brother!
Do u take requests? Please do one with Leo and mike, you know to for mikey to regain that one piece that fell out of his heart when Leo 'picked' him please!
P.s. u don't have to, I'm just bored so I'm spending my time pleading to people request ;) but it would be nice if you do

Uuuuhhh, cool! You did a great job! :D

Benny~

Great fic. I've read it a few times now... it's just really well done. Having it from Raph's POV was brilliant. It's got that awesome fan fiction drama and angst, but it leaves you with a "Yeah, turtles kick ass!" feeling :)

fantastic! :)

:D Wow. this is so wicked. lol. LOVE IT! God, I wish I could write like this! HA! I'm so going to ask you to read my TMNT fanfic when I think its worthy of you. I loved 's awesome... its amazing... the way you seemed to match Raph from the jump. There was not one word here that was out of place. And out of all the brothers to have to choose... Leo. Of course Leo. Because it would break him the most. It's incredible. Its amazing. It's wicked beyond belief.

Great piece!

this was sad ... but good.

That was great! I was really worried for a moment but I love the way you ended it. Simply wonderful!