If older brothers are that overprotective, I rather have an older brother than an older sister. My older sister would have laughed if I was being choked to death... (That's what she said, too!)

A good read, poor John having to go through all that angst and trauma. Glad his family, and the rarity of having Grandpa Grant in a fic! where there to help him.

IR Stars :-)

This has been a lovely story to read. My heart was breaking for everybody as they tried to cope, and especially for John.

I know exactly what John had been feeling. Great story.

I really like this. The whole idea of this story seems really interesting, and you're handling the characters really well. I hope you continue this at some point, it's really good.

Please continue :-)

I'm really enjoying this, it's very sweet and emotional. Would love to see more updates :)

Its a great story. Please please up date soon.

Thank you so much for updating your story. When I logged onto thunderbirds fanfiction and saw your story I thought I had logged in at a bookmarked page with your story on it and was very happy to see the "updated 3 hours ago". I am a big John fan and like the way you are presenting him. A death of a mother must have huge effects and I think you are doing a great job exploring that with your story. I too reread the entire fic before reading the new chapter and am glad John is getting better and also glad you are throwing in a few bumps because that is the way life is. Please keep up the good work.

Well J, you've got a reader in me, so you're far from talking to yourself, and the butterflies are out there too. *Grins* I had a bit of an RVFan Tracy binge just now, rereading the whole fic, and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. I'm so glad that John is slowly recovering and that he's starting to open up. I can so see his older self here, the man he becomes, and I'm really looking forward to the conclusion of this fic, and the McCarthys getting bit on the butt by karma. Extremely enjoyable as usual, lovely to see an update. Xxx

Loved this chapter and thank you for the great update x

Hiya! Generally when someone reviews my stuff, I reciprocate and check out theirs! I'm not particularly into Crim Minds, and I've no idea what Lance even is, but I like this one! Poor John, but he seems to be getting better! I'm sad to notice it's been a while since you've updated; but any chance we'll get the ending? I wanna know if Ed gets his just desserts! A really good story!

i really hope you'll update this fic _ i really love it! you almost got me crying! (i could only stop myself cause my family was in the room and they always look funny at me when i laugh or something like that while i'm on the pc) so please continue this soon

I am so sorry that i didn't review this last chapter but you know me! I'll pop in every once in a while lol Well, i am glad that everything ended happily and i wanted to say that i enjoyed this story immensely and do hope that you will continue writing and improving :)

Trin X

LOVE IT! UPDATE ASAP! lolz unless its over, then: GREAT ENDING! :P this is one of my most favorite stories ever! :P