Reviews for The Real Deal
TVDgrail chapter 17 . 7/9
There are some stories that you can't forget. This is one of them. But the worst happens when the author doesnt finish the story and leaves you to curse and plead the author to finish it for God's sake. So, here I am, pleading you to come back and let me have some peace.
Guest chapter 17 . 6/20
It's been 13 years.
Would you so kindly reconsider leaving this story at such a point in time? I've been obsessing over their pairing and this will be the only fanfic I will read about them, so please.
Please, would you write the ending to this story?

Thank you, if you ever see this, and decide to update it ️
Xxxx chapter 17 . 6/13/2019
Amazing work! Though it's a shame that so many issues are left unresolved, it was nonetheless a very good read! I hope you update it one day, I'd love to see what happens next :)
Guest chapter 17 . 1/13/2019
Are you posting more chapters?
DarknessAndDeath chapter 17 . 11/12/2017
congratulation on you baby girl. I hope you update soon. I know it's been almost 10 years but I'm seriously hoping you haven't lose interest in this story, because i'm official addicted. I need more, it's so good. I really enjoyed it. I'm a recently Lisa/Jackson shipper and adore Cillian Murphy. Have you watch Disco Pigs?, if you haven't I definitely recommend it. I wasn't really excited with the first few chapters and was bored and had a hard time keeping interest in them to read them. I feel like I had to tried because I wanted to read every Lisa/Jackson fanfic, I'm so glad you did because I just read like 6 or 7 chapters in a row because I was that hooked. I hope Alex makes a appearance again, I'm interested to see how that will turn out. I like that they are having sex a lot. I like that Jackson has started thinking and caring about someone besides himself. I like your character development especially with Jackson. I've really enjoyed the Jackson/Lisa interactions. I think that Jackson is kinda jealous over Novelli. I like that Jackson just wants to be with Lisa. Great story, I really hope you continue this. well done.
DarknessAndDeath chapter 16 . 11/12/2017
I love that Jackson professed his love for Lisa. I love the whole toilet scene especially how Jackson Kicked the door down and saw Lisa on the toilet. I like that Jackson is willingly to go in witness protection for Lisa. I of course Always enjoy their interaction. I like that Jackson apologised to Lisa for bringing her into this mess. I like that Lisa is scared of Jackson seeing cry because that means he will think she is a Liability. I like how savage Jackson got at the end.
DarknessAndDeath chapter 15 . 11/12/2017
congratulation on having your baby. I love the cliffhanger, but no Charley dead. That is so wrong. I like that Jackson revealed more about his past. I like that we found out that Jackson is scared of spiders and he scared Lisa. I like that he ran into the house so he could tell Lisa her friend was dead even thought he has bad experience in the house. I like that Lisa felt like some one was watching her in the kitchen. I like that Lisa went to find food. I like that they are gonna tell Keefe know that Colm is a assassin. Great work
DarknessAndDeath chapter 14 . 11/12/2017
I like it, and I seriously like the cliffhanger you left it on. I hope Lisa doesn't get rape. I love the Lisa/Jackson moments. I like that Lisa told Jackson the truth and he got super angry and then started hurt her. then he kind lost it and kissed her. I like that Jackson killed that man who tried to ill Lisa. I like that colm confronted Lisa and I hope jackson saves her and then when they get away he teachers her how to fight. I like the diner scene and how she keep falling asleep. I like that we learned a bit more about Jackson history and Life before Lisa. another great chapter. well done.
DarknessAndDeath chapter 13 . 11/12/2017
Awww I love it. especially the ending running hand in hand. Yes I was right about Colm. I like that Lisa/Jackson had sex. I like that he was cold to her after he got out of the shower, because he thinks Lisa will leave him. I like that he comforted her and tried to resist her affections but eventually gave in. I like that he gave her some lollies to eat, calling more about her then himself. I love it. I'm really enjoying the Lisa/Jackson interactions. well done
DarknessAndDeath chapter 12 . 11/12/2017
Okay that was tense, I'm glad I'm listing to the song life of the party by Shawn mendes. anyhow I love that Lisa is helping Jackson with the bodies. I like how Lisa ask Jackson to kill her, so she won't get raped. I like that Jackson got them out of the situation and killed them. I really like that George made Lisa promise that Jackson won't hurt Alex. I like that they made out after the murders and were gonna have sex but Lisa stop it. so this is my favourite chapter. I like they they love each other. I like Jackson's quick thinking with the pen and the security tape plus not touching anything. I hope they grab Lisa's dress. I hope that Charley is okay and I still believe that Colm is working for George. and that they killed tablot because he was growing suspicious of Colm. I hope Jackson teachs Lisa a few self defence stuff. I really like that killing George had some sort of effect on Jackson. Great work. well done.
DarknessAndDeath chapter 11 . 11/12/2017
no no you can't kill Tablot, that is wrong, he was so nice. wow I really like the end of turn of events. I like that Jackson isn't going to get kill but will most likely get tortured and forced to kill Lisa. I like the ending Lisa/Jackson scenes, I like that George caught on really soon about Lisa. I like that Brody didn't rape Charley and just got information out of her. I like they they hurt Jackson and Lisa told her to stop. I like that it appears that George really cares about his daughter. I like that Jackson apologised to Lisa and that Lisa believes that Jackson will kill George. I like that brief phone call between Jackson/Lisa. I'm hoping the tape is safe. I hope they survive and Charley is okay. I feel like colm is a double-agent. well done.
DarknessAndDeath chapter 10 . 11/12/2017
I like it. I like that how long it is. I like that Jackson/Lisa almost had sex. I love that Jackson have Lisa the tape. I like that talk about the two different people with art, me personally I'm more like Jackson with death doesn't scare me but yet I don't appreciate my life. I like that they had dinner together and I love that rain scene. I like that they almost got caught. I really enjoyed the Jackson/Lisa interactions. well done.
DarknessAndDeath chapter 9 . 11/10/2017
I love it. I love love love their interactions. I love how long this chapter is. I like that I was spot on about George being Jackson boss. I like that Jackson helped Lisa and her friend. Seriously my first thought when that guy left Charley's apartment was that he raped her. I like that Jackson and Lisa kissed a few times and that they fell asleep next to each other. I like that Lisa got jealous about Jackson helping her friend. I like that Jackson was wowed by Lisa a few times. I like that Lisa believes that he has a heart and he says he doesn't. I just really enjoyed reading this. well done.
DarknessAndDeath chapter 8 . 11/10/2017
I like it. I like the cliffhanger. I love the Jackson/Lisa reunion totally didn't disappoint. I think you truly nail their interaction. I like that that woman was Jackson fiancee and my theory is George is Jackson's Boss. The one who organised the assassination attempt on the Keefe's. I like that Jackson kissed Lisa. I like that he is protecting Lisa. I think also that Alex knows something important whether it be that she knows of her father and fiancee's business or something else of equal important. I love the long chapter. well done.
DarknessAndDeath chapter 7 . 11/10/2017
I like it, another enjoyable chapter. I like that Lisa is working things out for herself. I like that Lisa told her friend about Jackson. I like that she failure with Jackson, but is not give up. I like the cliffhanger. I like that she is making connection. I can't wait for the Jackson/Lisa reunion. well done.
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