Thank you

yes henlo

I just spent an hour looking for this in my favorites before I realized that I never actually added this after I created my account which is a damn shame as I absolutely adore this fic. It also says something that I have read this story since before I even got on this site and it is the story that began my addiction to fanfiction. Anywho just wanted to say that I am disappointed in myself for bot adding this to my faves. But now that I have this time I'm about to read it for the 7th time.

God damn Akzeriuth always hits you where it hurts the most man

D'awww, just a simple action changed so much.

I just kinda missing Luke and Asch and re-watch the series. I never having any desireto come to the fandom itself, but then I found myself here. Haha.
First, I wanna thank you for this wonderful fanfic you've created.
Second, my wish has been fulfilled. I always wanted to see Asch and Luke like this, as brothers. I'm close to tears now-ahem-
Third, you got my respect. You finished your fanfic! 86 chapters with an epilogue at that!
Fourth, you left me with a wonderful memories about the series, simply, because this fanfic existed. So, that's why this fanfic was going to become my first and last from this fandom.
Thank you.

Oops - forgot I wasn't logged in. The previous review is mine. XD

This is the third time I've read this story, and it makes me cry every time! The brotherly connection between Luke and Asch is amazing, and it makes me wish it had happened in canon. I especially like how they mentally talk to each other so much - it adds such an interesting new dimension to the plot!

There are a few grammar/spelling issues in every chapter, and the way you change perspectives from one character to another in the middle of a paragraph is a bit confusing at times, but overall, this story is really well done. The characterizations are spot on, and nearly everything that happens is believable.

I wish I could read more of your stories, but I haven't played Tales of Graces, so I'm sure I'd be really confused. Oh, well - maybe I'll read it anyway eventually. Either way, I hope you write more soon!

I really loved this 's not often that i find stories of this lenght that are actually dedication to your story was one more plus for plot was phenomenal,not deviating too much from the canon,but still retaining an air of originality
The same could be said about the remained in character yet they were further developed and the readers were given insight on their thoughts and emotions,making them more dear to us and making it easier to symphathize with them.I loved the bond between Asch and Luke as well as the relationships they had with the other story was quite realistic when it came to cause and effect and the character's story seemed like a roller coaster ride of emotions to me .I got to feel many different emotions such as sadness,excitement and anxiety throughout its writing style as well as your use of grammar and vocabulary were excellent as up the good work.

Similar to, but a vast improvement over cannon... almost to the point where when I try to remember bits of the game I recall details of Reflections first

I realised it now...Did Asch just state that Natalia was equivalent to Yulia?

Because...(smirks)
-Asch said "Sure, and I'm Yulia's cousin."
-Asch's cousin is Natalia (ignoring the fact that Natalia isn't the real Princess)

So...Natalia is Yulia? (Grins) That'd make for an awesome joke.

Cutest and awesomest tradition ever. I wish I had soooo many flowers around to do the same...T-T

I love this story.. twas told beautifully and captured the amazing bond between the brothers without resorting to cheap and immoral means. each character was clearly detailed and didn't deviate but instead developed. best game fanfic I've come across.. Welldone.

Very late to the party, but I finally read to the end after all these years. This story was really incredible, through and through. You are a crazy talented writer and story weaver~ I love the emotions, the highs and lows, and everything about this tale. AND I think you wrote characters very in character, which is always phenomenal~~

You are a rockstar! Thanks for writing your stories all the way through to the end~~

You are amazing, to be able to think of such a detailed and full story, so many words, and had only taken 5 years to complete. With an epilogue! You're seriously awesome. Though I haven't read this fic, I still respect you simply because of the fact that you pushed yourself to complete this long story.