! That was sad but beautiful, so keep it up!

I would attempt to review this properly, but I think it would come out incoherent, and I'd probably get as far as "Guh," and collapse completely.

There’s no life in the engine and no life in the driver.

*tears* Just the idea of this...I don't know. I usually have objections to cars and HP characters, but it is very in-character here. Every little movement and thought sticks out as very Remus. This story leaves me missing Sirius, even though I write and read him every day. His conspicuous absence in this piece leaves me feeling sort of empty. I think I'm channeling Remus XD

Lovely.

Gah... I don't know which one I like better... This one gave more of a sad feeling which was more effective... But I think the other one was more prettily writen... If that makes sense... See I read them backwards. I always do that. I like it though.

Sad :(

You write so well!

"Numbing, that’s what he meant. In two months’ time, only many, many years back, they would experience this feeling. No, it wasn’t really a physical feeling; it was the mind, the depths of the heart, held petrified, that would soon beg for the previously-anticipated surge of fear. It would be transformed into a refuge that only the brave could seek the shelter of. In this refuge would they be released of that frozen state"

That's a really sad thing to think. And to try to imagine

"He turns his gaze upwards and narrows his eyes to block out the glowing-lemon sun, before turning his back on the glistening lake.

“It’s a lot warmer up there…”"

Yes, yes it is.

"Not until two more months’ time, and many, many years back, would his parents have to feel those things. And not until many years from now, would Harry expect, or not expect, to feel it, too."

About that last part...well, I sure as hell would hope not!

That was a really good one for yellow. I liked it :)

"two months after Sept 31st is Oct 31st"

errmm...isn't it one month later?

OOh soo wonderful :)

It gave me the chills. BRILLIANT.

**Duckies

Very neat idea. I hope you get the next color up soon :)

"He would have made us get out of the car to make a shrine or something weird like that."

Hehehehe, yes, yes he would.

Poor Remus :( He's the only Marauder left

"Oh yeah. Fucking radio doesn’t work. It was him that broke it."

*giggles* I can just imagine Sirius & Remus yelling over the radio, Sirius pushing Remus' hand away, jabbing a button...and having the entire damned thing break.

"And no choice is left to him but to keep driving alone, to become a distant and forgotten speck, in the orange horizon. Which he knows he’ll never reach."

*tears* Aw! So sad! :(

hay :)

yay...nice story! i like the color orange. orange

yeah...you make it sound so deep. and emotional. it sounds so col

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ABSOLUTELY AWESOME. very creative. heh heh

ok

see ya

o3o yay you're doing a oneshot compilation! :D is that one 'the other red' prompt gunna be a part of this?

Anyhow, about the first installment... Damn D8 That was beautiful. I love the voice here, and how you somehow manage to convey so much emotion despite the simplicity. I swear, you make the smallest things hit home.

Some shit I really loved:

"Still, he counts, by himself, thirteen speed limit signs, four sandbags and the carcass of some animal that died long ago.

The signs, sandbags and road kill are just signs, sandbags and road kill.

/He would have something to say./" That strikes me as so -real- ; ; because it really is the randomest, smallest things that make you miss people.

and:

" 'No I’m not… I’m looking for a place to deal with it. Not run away from it.'

/Sure./" Gods, that stabs me in the gut. It really does. It's so... Remus. And a bit of all of us, I suppose D8

And of course, I adore the end. God dammit. -cries-

Beautiful! This is my new second favorite!

-Becs

(In case your wondering, I'm too lazy to sign in...)

*sigh* these sad RemusxSirius fics make me all sad, but they're so beautifully written and u do it justice, so keep it up!

I really like this concept... I'm so excited to see where it brings you! YAY!

**Duckies

I like this. I love the idea of expressing a color in each unrelated story. Very very nice.

oh, I like it. Back to reviewing rampaging. :D

'It's still really quiet... you know... without-'

I know who he's without :D *grins*

I think that this is written beautifully. Absolutely great vocabulary and wonderful writing style :D

love,

JULIA :D ;O :P