When will ch 19 be out ?

And is it soon and how soon?

I thought they (Dil and Ichy) split up for good?

great story. sadley i believe u stopped writing stories. :{ but i just had to point out that u spelled definetly wrong, u spelled it like difiantly, like a disobediant child or something

awsome story, you should update more.

I hope you're still writing this because its a very good story in my opinion. Update soon, please?

To be honest I am not a fan of the land before time franchise I did love the first one, but the love ends there. This however is I feel a good story and I hope you will continue it in future. I do wish to point out that some words are incorrect, for example in chapter 18 top of the page I think the sentence “I’m…I’m not costumed to talk to other kinds of dinosaurs” she said, feeling ashamed about it. Should have accustomed instead of costumed. There are other examples but I am unable to recall them. Not that it ruined the story for me. Though I understand I do the same thing.

Keep writing,

Please update! This is a very good story. I have one thing to say because I am bad on this too. Please check your spelling. Don't take this as a flame because it is not. Otherwise, I really enjoyed this. I think I will watch The Land Before Time IV tomorrow. Again, good story. Update please!

Good story. It has left me thinking. There is a lot of suspense.

Keep up the good work, and I can't wait until the next update.

Hey, were you planning on having any Yiff in this story? If not, that's cool, it's still an awesome series.

Nice

Keep it bra.

Keep it up!

nkeep it up

Keep it up man.

sweet keep it up