Wow! Hagrid's voice! That was perfection. Btw who was that kid? I loved it. There aren't many stories on Hargird. Thanks for this one! Loved it :)

Bahaha, this is funny and incredibly original. I've seen my fair share of Mary Sues, but never a fic that draws the reader into the story! And I love your Hagrid voice, it is simply brilliant.

Aah, brilliant. Good to see another take on the ending of Deathly Hallows. Your Hagrid voice is perfect and I've never seen anybody do it so well. Great job on a very good ficlet!

Adorable and very funny! Your Hagrid voice is perfect - not many people can write him but you do a great job.

I love Hagrid he's so awesome. :) wonder who the kid was?

Great ficlet, it really captured Hagrid's character despite the overuse of apostraphes. lol. I'm assuming this is written post book 7?

anyway i hope you keep writing about the characters like this who are too often forgotten.

Skulblaka

Hagrid is so... Hagrid-like...

Good job!

Reader-Writer.

Awesome. Very nicely done. Hagrid never gets enough love!

(you got the accent down perfectly)

Truly amazing, and very Hagrid. It's so good that JKR could have written this herself.

Although we know it doesn't end like this, I love your version.

The fact that it is all-dialogue adds to the seer brilliance.

I have never read a Hagrid-centric fic before now, but I will if there ae more like this, for sure!

Eek. It's lovely, really.

wow, what a fantastic portrayal of Hagrid. The way in which you have written him is just so acurate, and i'm not just talking about his language. You have captured his emotions about friendship, the war, giants, Harry and love all in one tiny oneshot.

You really have achieved something remarkable here, really this was a great read, I enjoyed every word, so thank you.

- Frayed.

wow. great one. Very unique writing, I love that dialogue-sort-of-monologue-style. And you got Hagrid's language perfectly, I can basically HEAR him when reading this.

I also like the alternative ending. The ghost stag in the forbidden forest, and the trio walking off with Ginny... yeah, it would have made a nice ending.

thanks for writing this. It's very different, but I like it a lot.

Heh. This was very nicely done, funny, and poignant. Well done.

I love Hagrid...

Silv, you're amazing. I love all of your stories!

Cute. I've never read a fanfic centered on Hagrid before.

Ha ha! This is wonderful. Although we now know that this isn't how it all ended, I think it would have made a very satisfying ending. I can totally picture Hagrid talking to this ickle first year who went for such a crazy dare and telling him or her about Harry just like this. And you bring up something very interesting- what would it have been like for Harry to return to Hogwarts after the final battle? Certainly the professors would have been rather confused about how to teach him. His fellow students would surely have been in awe. And there would have been so many bitter reminders throughout the school (try playing Quidditch after that!).