Absolutely wonderful. You're passion for the show and talent as a writer really come to light in this work. I can't wait to continue this story.

O.O Another one? Well I'll be excited to see where the rest of this story goes, but that's it for now! :D

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'

Your stories are terrific. They have not only inspired me to become a better writer, but also to extend all my artistic abilities. I believe I'm going to make a series of mixes, a soundtrack if you will, for every installment Of the the overall story that makes up your narrative. When I finish, I'll send you the end result if you agree to listen to it.

Go with Christ, Saint Jax.

You write some of the best Eureka 7 stories around.

Again, a very good story. Also, it was a very suspenseful ending too. Great job.

But I do have one question; did you watch the English dubbed version, or the Japanese version with English subs? I'm just asking because I don't remember them calling the ship (which they just called "The Gekko") "Moonlight" or calling Talho "Yuki" in the sub, and I never really watched the dub.

This story is so cool! You are a really great writer!

a great chapter, a high quality work. great job.

man the story just gets even better does it well i have to say it getting really interesting. cant wait to read the next one. see ya later

So cool. I loved how you tied in Gidget and Moondoggie into this one (I wish you would do another fanfic about them). None of the charcters were OOC. You write beautifully.

You gotta do one more man. Don't leave us hangin'! :)

Hey! Me again. This sequel was just as great as your last story. Sorry it took me so long to review but I didn't find it until like yesterday when I just so happenend to be perusing the Eureka 7 category. Anyway that's a bit of a cliff hanger you left us readers with. So are you going to continue on with this story or maybe do a time jump and start on a story focusing on Maurice and this 'Ariadne'? Anyway if you decide to write anything else you can bet that I'll review. (Unless you write about an anime I haven't seen. ;P) ANYWAY...JA!

A wonderful continuation that makes this along with your previous story in my opinion the best Eureka Seven fanfics ever made. I know it must take a lot of time to write so much onto one installment but I do hope to see more of this. I love the level of detail as you mature the characters in believable ways and especially your take on Eureka and Renton bringing about a new unified evolution for humans and coralians.

And indeed, I'm conflicted as I want the story to keep going, but I also want it to finish so that I don't worry about it not being finished. But in spite of a semi-cliffhanger here both of the stories are satisfying and bring enough closure to things that they can serve as endings should you decide to not continue.

I also wonder if you'll have Renton and Eureka develop powers like Norb's eventually, that is some of the abilities he and Sakuya displayed in the series, controlling trapar, creating it (well Eureka does that while flying) and how Norb tossed LFOs about with mere waves of his hands and caused that immense eruption of power as he convinced Holland that the military had lied to him.

The focus on Gidget and Moondoggie was wonderful, though I do wish you had shown how they made up. Now I just hope that you'll bring Dominick and Anemone into the next installment as it was always great to see them interact with each other and with Renton and Eureka (as they were essentially their counterparts) and we didn't get a lot of the latter.

I also like that you manage to keep a good amount of humor in the story, just as the series did. Renton's thoughts about Sakuya's cuteness, the coralian's obsession with odd hair, not to mention Norb and Sakuya's interactions in and demeanor in general were hilarious.

As a final point, good work at making the characters, even military, human enough and not just blood thirsty or stupid. Its a difficult thing to do with such minor characters, especially since as the "bad guys" in the story they do need to have a certain "evil" edge to them, as evil as people can be when driven by fear and propaganda. The raging typhoon of destruction that Eureka and Renton became when they referred to her as an "it" and a "bug" was well done.

I've just recently found your stories, and I'm hooked. Please continue. And is there any particular reason that you write everything on one "page"? I'm sorry, but it's really annoying that there is no possible way to save where one stops reading without having to scroll down/up all the time.

wow just wow keep up the good work found this very well written and excellent story i did not know out of the nest was gonna get continued though im glad it did hope you get the sequel up soon

Beautiful! This is, so great! Your writing! Why can't I write like you! So descriptive! So, full of emotion! It's just so amazing! I would think I was reading a chapter from a classic book! Keep up the amazing work! You are an amazing author. FYI, you are the only person to ever make my 'Author Alert' list.

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