Update?

Amazing fiction! I love everything you've done, and I STRONGLY agree with you continuing this fiction. I think this has made amazing progress, and I love your writing styles. Now, I know that you might (maybe) want something other than praise, but I'm not a fantastic writer, and do NOT have original ideas. I just wanted to say that your foreshadowing is beautiful, and I kind of maybe perhaps sort of look up to you and how well you write. Love you! (Just kidding...I mean, just kidding that I love you in an intimate sort of way, but I love you and everything you do...so. Yeah.)

Oh my god, please update soon. I need to know what happens next! I'm becoming a serious TxHxK shipper. Tomarryoya XD

First, I must tell you that I think you write very well. Don't take this the wrong way, but the first half of the story written seems very juvenile while the second half is so different. It's very disjointed. Secondly, when I read this story, I was under the impression it would be a romance with Harry paired with one of the hosts, so reading that Tom/Kyoya scene was a very unpleasant surprise. At the beggining they both seemed to like Harry and there was no indication that something was going on between them, so when they started going at each other my eyes bugged out. Especially the way they talked about liking Harry but still were touching each other sexually. It turned my stomach honestly. That being said, I do think you're a talented writer, but I don't think I can deal with a threesome.

threesome, I want threesome! threesome is hot. I wouldn't mine harry sandwiched between the two. Both will defend Harry. Kyouya seems to be most dominant n less aggressive, though I wouldn't think the family would appreciate having BOTH sons taken AND are involved in an incest relationship. I hope there's a scene where they protect harry from Dumbledore. I like Dumbledore n Weasley bashing. I wouldn't mine it NOT being a threesome; but the flirt scene in my head is HOT!

well ...let's see...I would like to see the trip to the sea...remember that scene between Kyoya and Haruhi? ...it needs something there...:you could get Tom bring Harry in the room only to see Kyoya and Haruhi...OR ...Harry is in that situation with some other host, Harry is clueless to the advances the other 2 make on him soHoney or Mory could display a bit of agressivenes and push Harry on the bed...
-i would like the pairing to be adressed as a serious matter/conflict...Harry will cme into his inheritance, Kyoya will want to keep his reputation, Tom hates loosing...so Tom could make it a debate subject for the next contest he participates in(open to the public, and invitations) about homosexality, BDSM, some fetishes if they are wrong and polyamory...he would win but wwith conditions or consequences...
-OOO..Harry's in big trouble...they found out who he is..."you're the surviver from the article...what if there's a few other things he's hiding? so he's a bit relieved when they found this...?...
The Dursley matter-I was curious if it was going to be adressed? ...
Ok...some mixed and random ideas: (use any that you like):
-Harry starts having nightmares...he's stressed, he overworks himself to the point he faints
-bad sickness: a filming day ...Harry is late...everyone is angry, he's not at school, he's not picking up his phone, they all want to rip his head off...so Haruhi takes them to their home to look for Harry...they loook for him in the house but he's in the kitchen he is collapsed on the floor surrounded by glass shards, with a very high fever and he's bleeding from the cuts, he hit his head on the floor, they don't know how long he was there on the floor...he could have been drugged/poisoned the day befoore -someone slipped him something, no one knows who, they only know someone wants to get rid of him...(assuming Sirius is hunted by debt collectors, he has enemies and they turn on his most important thing)...he has a hard time recovering..Tom and Kyo put their rivalry aside to help him...
- a series of kidnapings...it's all over the news...the OOtoris are on high allert, club suspended, everyone has to leave attended, entrance perchesition of every student and staff ...
-kyoya finds the"I will not tell lies scar"...
-the girl that betrayed Harry could try to sink her claws in him again:public humiliation? ...they find out too late...
-someone pushes the something or other in the prop room...Harhi is pushed out of the way by Tamaki who is hurt (a broken arm?, some blood matting his hair?)
-Remus shows up as a substitute teacher
-Honey's father hosts a party for his birthday and sends invitations...they meet the brother

I think this is how the relationship between them will work :(it might not)
Kyoya seems to listen and think before acting...very calculated and ordered, tender when it comes to affection(very small gestures that mean a lot), he brings the other 2 stability, he has trouble in letting go of his controlling nature
Tom seems to react with agressiveness to Harry, but a very good manipulator...(he coerces you into doing things for him)...he might not fool Harry and if he does I see a few very steamy scenes in which they will play...he brings change,he asseses what they need and gives it to them, he is very possesive, to the point of obsession...
Harry: oblivious, he thinks he has no value because Sirius runs from him; hes rich but he's not exactly aware of what it means(richer than the other 2 and royal blood?); he has a very hard time in getting attached to other people,ssometimes he turns cruel...he brings passion in the things he does

Seria genial si continuas es tu historia :) Y yo me decantaría por el trio verdadero, drama y consecuencias de repudio incluidas.
Besos desde España
Dee Ailf :*

What did he lie about? I mean yeah, he didn't tell them about it. But he didn't exactly lie about it.

Cant wait for more!

PLEASE UPDATE

I await the next chapter

I really hope this is a tom/harry/kyoya

Oooh nice please tell me you will be please? I LOVE THIS SO FAR!

Love It! Though, now, the two brothers have tKen a huge step back In trying to get Harry...a question is, was Harry Aware of his wealth or not...

What the actual motherfruking cod. This story is bloody awesome!
Threesome? Hell. Fucking. Yes! I'd like to read about it in a humerous manner, but still rather serious, but not serious enough to tear apart the story. The disowning thing, hmm, purrhaps Tom could be disowned since technically he was also adopted? This could also bring in some angsty, flashbacky/whatever type-ish moments.
I love this story so much! Btw, that cliffhanger? Hmmm, what shall happen next, I wonder...?