It's quite funny how I've actually read this multiple times. More than a year has passed since my last "non-review", but I want to say this was a wonderful story; I think I can see why you hadn't updated it (it is my understanding that wouldn't allow anymore stories with explicit sexual acts). I find myself hoping this story got continued somewhere else, but I can't shake the feeling this story is dead. A shame, if that's truly the case, still, I'd like to thank you, author: I've started 'shipping' Cloud x Elena because of your work. I'd like to offer my apologies, if I've wasted your time.

Well, bye, then.

I know this isn't much of a review, but I thought it looked good. Nice start! I'll move onto the next chapters to see how the story develops. Thanks for sharing it with us.

When I got to the end of this I swore... with great feeling and disappointment. Ive really enjoyed all the different character interactions and the the building relationship between Cloud and Elena (with a side order of Turks) has been very honest feeling. Hope you are still working on this.

Very sexy story. Intimate. The last chapter was unnerving. It seems like you are done with the story, dissapointing. I would love some closure on this great fic. I doubt one review will get you to continue, however I would love if you could confirm that this fic has gone cold.

I love you! I have been trying to search for a good story on this pairing and here I have found it. Looks like certain things may be on the horizon. I can't wait for more. Update soon.

i've read a few cloud x elena stories... none of which i've ever liked- until now.

i love it. i think it's a great story and i love how you are portraying each of the characters.

I hope you update this really soon - I love the progession throughout the story. This chapter is really emotional and upsetting, but I'd really love to see more chapters.

Glad to see you updating!

I feel sorry for Elena and how they tortured her _

I hope you wouldn't give up on this sotry x3 I really love it.

Gruesome and horrifying as this is, I can't help but be glad that at least the fic isn't abandoned. Elena must have crawled quite a ways upwards to waylay Cloud when she did.

I found this story today and read it all. I really love it and love how cloud treat Elena, I can see them together, a cute couple

Update please!

Never thought I would like this pairing but WOW! haha

Keep up the work and please update whenever you can!

Ah! Please update soon!

This is so good!

I'm really happy to find that this story is up and running again. Can't wait for further chapters.

This is so lovely. Please don't stop writing, you are really good!

I have to know what Tseng is going to do!