oh...there's no more...well then... that was a fun ride...

You need space,I honestly have trouble reading but you're doing a good job.i'm off to the other chapter now.

Tottally going to my favorites. I love this story. Anyway don't keep us hanging

Awww... Goku adoring his little family :3

Woah..chichi should better know when to give up or else she could get killed!

I've been reading this from 9:00 to 10:30

This is a great story! I really really love it and I hope you will be able to complete it one day. Until next time :)

Please finish the story! It's really amazing! I NEED to know what happens.

I love your plot, and I noticed your improvement in your writing! Very good! It's been 8 years since you last updated, and I will be waiting for that update! I bet you are past high school hmm? That means you're probably very busy! Oh well, it was a good story, and I will be overjoyed if you update at least one more time.

-Syd

good read

Loved it! Can't wait for the new chapter! ITS GONNA BE AWESOME!

The story is great, but you need to learn about paragraphs!

OMG! What a wonderful story!

I can't believe you were 16(?) y.o when you've started writing this story. I'm really impressed :)BIG respect! :D

I just can't wait to read the finall chepter... but don't worry, I can wait even 10 years- this story is worth of it.

You are amazing, wonderful, great and talented writer! You are AWESOME! :D :D :D

I must add this story to my Favourites ;)

I will wait for your update... until you update... I hope it will happen soon, but if not, well... I will still wait :D

(oh, and sorry for my english- it's horrible, I know :p)

I love this story

please finish this story it was amazing!