| Reviews for Jealousy |
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  Krystal chapter 1 . 5/31/2018 Awesome |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/6/2017 That was hot |
 LW12 chapter 1 . 10/22/2016 i love it |
| Brp chapter 1 . 3/31/2015 This story continues to be my favorite, no matter how many years pass. |
| SheWolfMedjai chapter 1 . 12/3/2014 Please make another! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/13/2014 bravo! |
| Sunsetcheetah chapter 1 . 2/1/2014 Nice quick read. Maybe to keep it more in character, not having Elisa decide to wear a skirt and heels after learning she was going to deal with Demona would be better. I'd also suggest looking up how to write really hot love scenes. I liked yours a lot but always room for improvement! Besides, then you can write some more for us to read_ |
| Evillullaby chapter 1 . 4/29/2013 I loved how you didn't rush right into the 'M' part, but let the story build up to it most storys i've read don't it's nice. |
| Luxor-DestroyerOfWorlds chapter 1 . 2/8/2013 XD yay |
| jayme.scholtes chapter 1 . 1/8/2013 Only one small comment & I'm not being pissy or critical or anything. Demona's eyes glow red when she's angry not white like the boys. That's it. Otherwise awesome story. Later! |
| Demona Volturi chapter 1 . 12/30/2012 they are a great match! |
| Jolliapplegirl chapter 1 . 10/22/2012 You should make another chapter the ssame as this one but completely from Goliaths POV. |
| Vampyglamour25 chapter 1 . 10/16/2012 Awesome! Hot! |
| esca6angel chapter 1 . 7/5/2012 It's quite rare for Goliath to be jealous, I like the concept. |
| Emma H. Joestar chapter 1 . 6/10/2012 OH THIS WAS AMAZING,I MEAN GOLIATH IS A MALE AND WHEN YOU TRUST PASS ON HIS PROPERTY HE GONNA KICK SOME 'S FUNNY WITH THAT WHOLE " He was so angry his eyes were beginning to glow was also growling viciously at Aidan" I WAS ALL DAMN, SOMEONES GONNA GET IT. lovely yours chocolate E |
