Awww

So good..

Like it, it was hilarious in the beginning and very good with the rest.

Hooooooot!
Fairly new in the fandom and hunting for fics I found yours, and well... I already said it, but it was hot as hell! XD
I'm fan of Kanda being rude but well, Kanda burning in desire is also a good look
Oooh! I don't think it's really important, I have read several people writing it differently, but I'm used to the name that appears in the manga, so... If you want (because the fic it's yours and therefore yours to do as you want) change the name Linali for "Lenalee".
Otherwise, it was a good one shoot. Yay, I need more!

"Do you know how hard you made me? Do you understand how fucking irresistible you looked dancing like that?" Kanda whispered harshly...
I admit I died at this moment & went to yaoi heaven...Kanda is terribly hot! Allen is terribly cute! Can there ever be a better combination? Yullen ftw :D

I love this so much! So beautifully written! I wish I could write that well!

LOVED it. God that was hilarious, and waaaaaaaaaaaay sexy. ;)

You're amazing :D this story was great!

XD omg this was such a cute;/steamy fic.
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I don't even want to know why Lavi had this outfit

This was amazing. The idea was very creative and your descriptive skills are astounding. I could see Allen dancing, wrapped in silks. That's something not a lot of people can do. I can't wait to read more of your work :)

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
I'm with Kanda in heaven right now! I love it! It was absolutely amazing!

I liked the style of your writting and the plot. Also I think you should add more.

LOVE IT!

It'd be funny if there was an epilogue where lavish and everyone saw what happened or found out the results of the dare. But the ending was cute.

So hot...x/x Definitely LOVE it! *nosebleed*