loved it!

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That was a great story!

Ooh- I really, really liked this! I loved this!

It was so sweet and awesome and the descriptions were really good.

I love Mark and Roger! And I love how you portrayed them in this!

The end was so sweet and lovely...

Ok, I'm not coming up with good reviews today. Can't think of anything else to say but I totally loved this.

ah that was awesome! Nice work! D

wow.

your writing style is absolutely wonderful and so devoloped to such a high degree.

i was very impressed by this piece of writing and the way you playing with so many different descriptors.

all this needs is paragraphs. a basic grammar rule is to make a new paragraph whenever a new person speaks, and because the dialogue of this work is so incredibly intimate, each line /deserves/ to be assosicated with the proper person. it is easy to confuse who is speaking when one is so involved in the plot; your reader shouldn't have to pause in reading this lovely piece to figure who is saying what.

other than that, it was a delightful little fic and i was glad to read it.

I'm not sure how I feel about this story. It was really good and I loved it, but my feelings are too conflicting...my desire to see Mark and Roger together is fighting with the fact that I fell in love with Mark as the lonely one...grawr!

Very nice little story. I loved it very much.

I hate it when they're a "only tonight" thing, but that was cute anyway!