Oh my god I love this story please update quick xxxx

luv the story so far i get confused bout whats happening somtimes but i still like it

only one thing to say...

It's beautiful.

YAY I CAUGHT UP! um what can i say O.o wow you were right about graphic...i really don't have anything to say right now...im confused...what just happened?

YAY zombie survival guide! OH MY GOD I ALMOST CAUGHT UP! yay! again i love this story, but one thing i did notice, you switch between past tense and present tense a lot and i'm curious if thats intentional or not. thats just something i noticed and i was wondering..anways i hope to get to talk to you again! bye!

its 230 AM right now and i am reviewing..i must say i love it! amd go ask alice is an amazing book!

i love your story, again and you rock. i would right more but tired plus other things are making me incoherent so i will im you and talk you you again later

um hi it is 2:37 in the morning, and i have been reading your story since about 8. i must tell you this is one of the single most engaging storys i have read on fanfiction in a very long time. Honestly you are a beautiful writer, and you give amazing imagery without being to over the top. your story is also very original, i really like the ideas you have presented through your work. it is amazing. i really am enjoying this so far, adn i cant wait to see what happens next. i would write more but its late so i guess thats all!

...I read all of this fic in one sitting. I can't believe I did that, I never do that. But this was just so damn good. I love the characterization far too much. I think you may write the best Demyx I've ever read.

I also feel like a horrible fan because I want Demyx to be the one to die. Not because I like Axel more, but because I like Demyx more and I am always cruel to my favorite characters. (And I want to see the Saix angst) But I know whatever you write will be wonderful, if not also incredibly sad.

im so happy to see you updateing regularly, but sad that its comiing to an end...

Holy Christ, there are no words to describe what this chapter made me feel (other than kinda hot and bothered :P ). Exceptionally well written, and I suppose you gave fair warning about the graphic nature of this one. I love the relationships between all the characters, particularly the dynamic of knowledge vs. ignorance over their previous lives. I also love that this romance is so real. Not like the fairy tale sort of fluff we usually get stuck with. It's not clean, and it's not innocent, and it's even more beautiful because of that. I should point out that this chapter may inspire a similarly 'imperfect' love scene. Lovely and incredible, as per usual. Update soon _

... The title made me grin like a wicked little fox. I recall a certain SaiDem someone wrote that had a similiar ... feel.

Dear LORD, so much smut. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time (especially the SaiDem).

My only complaint is I hate the word 'seed'. Just ... I dunno. Makes me think plants are going to grow out of someone's ass. I know, that's horrible, isn't it? Typically I use 'essence' or something, but that's just me.

And once again, I brutally kick whoever invented 'cliffhangers'.

Awesome! I will always love this story! Even if someone dies, I'll still love it-a lot! This is amazing!

Update soon!

~the Prince

Wow...just...wow! Terribly graphic, in a terribly good way! This was a beautifully written chappie, a pleasure to read! Haha. Keep up the awesome work!

...my god. Blood balloons? *this would be where I die of laughter* Disturbing and yet hilarious. The tomato and haiku scenes were great too. Demyx is just enjoying his tomato, while Axel can't help but think sexual thoughts...

LOL! I love the last bit! "Get me some water, slave." Good chapter, and I like the cheery-ness of this one.

"Chickens aren't full of air..." *laughs*