To tell you the truth, this story can be minimized into one-good-shot, with happy ending! Good one!

totally forgot if I already reviewed. Anyway, I like this story alot. It just fits RJ so well to have a past like that.

I like this ending, dispite the fact that you kill off RJ

I'm glad Rj didn't kill hammy in this, you made RJ a bit of a good guy like he should be

Nice. You made this guy the reaper an even more sadistic being

Not so crazy about RJ being a real asshole, but it was pretty well written

that was really good. I like how you made it seem like nothing happened in the end, and the water turning to blood was a great idea

Not half bad, once again a little too short, but already said that it would be, so this one was pretty good

that was really short. add some detail and discription. give yourself a reason to say it had "all" been a dream.

That was really good. I didn't know RJ had a Magnum in his golf bag - and I don't want to know what else is in it! - but I liked that. It's sad to imagine what left him on his own, eh? Well, great story!

- Dija.

i read your home page and these are the TV shows tthat be both like American Dragon: Jake Long, The Angry Beavers, SpongeBob SquarePants, Dexter, Courage The Cowardly Dog, Edd, Ed, 'n Eddy, Teen Titans, Invader Zim, Dancing With The Stars, Family Guy, and Futurama.

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