Worst lime ever. Feasting hungerly? Omg what a horrible saying!

Its funny how writers warp Alice's gift convienantly for their stories. Apparently in this story Alice CAN only see a few mins into the future. Giving them just enough time be ohhh so close to being able to change anything...how convienant

Bella is boring as fuck in this. Why is there a fucking paragraph or two between sentences?
Charlie says "hey Bella" and then there's half a damn page of boring Bella inner monologue! Your killing me!

Great story thank you

wow bella sure made a huge deal out of not fucking much...all she has to do is call the cop shop...she knows the fucking cops down in forks! and tell them shes alive and well just freaking out cause her dad died...problem fixed...

you have to make shit believable! your just making bella seem fucking stupid

did bella seriously just say that charlies death was her fault? ya bella is was your fault that Charlie hit a deer.,,... since when is bella stupid like Edward?

why are you writing bella so immature

no don't touch me! my dads dead! don't touch me...my dads dead...the one I didn't even fucking care about!

so bellas a vamp and now magically shes best friends with the worst Cullen/? fuck that ...why?

and why in the fuck does everyone always write rose as if shes some goddess? have you seen her bone structure? she looks like a fucking man

Emmett like bella "whenever" she was human?

dumbass writer

and really must you go on and on about Edwards fucking feelings? This chapter was so hard to get through because is was sooooo fucking boring! I mean beat a dead fuckin horse much?

your bellas a fucking loser...dinner with my dad..."just what am I getting myself into!?"

shut the fuck up whore its just dinner

second have a fucking convo with your dad, hes paying for dinner the fucking LEAST you could do is talk to him.

I noticed that you haven't written for some time so I thought it best not to disturb you. However I would like to say that I have enjoyed reading this story. Thank you for leaving it up for us to enjoy. I hope RL is treating you kindly. : D

Can't believe you wrote this 6 years ago! Enjoying it so far xxx

Facinating to read from Jasper's POV. You are right...its not often done, especially for this scene. I like the way you wrote it. good idea!

Man, they are all so acting like they are at a funeral or something. Why would Edward be depressed over getting to keep his mate forever. Three days of agony is a small price to pay for a forever of love, eternal beauty, happiness, a family whole, wild, primal, spider-monkey sex (if they ever decide to lose their v-cards, the Damn prudes). Oh, yeah and they are unbelievably is horribly atrocious and depressing about all that. I want to personally smack Edward and Emmet, no offense. I mean, the whole "oh God, I have damned her soul crap never made any sense to me. She is now "undead," meaning never going to reside in Heaven or Hell, so what's his problem? Unless, he is planning to kill her in a few decades or centuries when he gets bored, needs to find another distraction, or another warm, squishy human to stalk and control every action of. I'm sorry, I got a little emotional there. I just never understood Edward. I'm team Jasper all the way, sometimes a Team Peter/Bella/Jasper, and occasionally a crossover Team Damon from Vampire Diaries. I really like your story. It is creative and written very well, I am enjoying it immensely. But that doesn't stop me from wanting to knock some sense into Doucheward' s head for being so selfish as to be all woe as me while his mate is in the most pain of her existence. Why tie her up. He should be laying next to her, cuddling, and hugging her securely to his "cold" chest and body. Try to help ease some of her pain. Tell her about her human memories and his devotional, obsessive like love. (Or was he only in love with her blood and that is why he is acting like this is the worst possible thing in the world to happen to him. ( He's acting like a drug addict being told that he will never see his prize ever again. Or a two year old who dropped his toy off a boat by accident, forever to miss it. CAN'T WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT UPDATE. Keep up the good work.

Please tell me you plan to wreak an awful vengeance on Jacob Black, the trouble-making little bastard! How he could ever claim to have once loved Bella, and act this way, is beyond me!