good. why isnt there a celebration for the pokemon?

Hello. Cliche as this story is, you've written it very well. I love it.

Shadow Ball doesn't hurt normal types though. So you know.

~Stormy

Awesome story! Eevees rule. Loved the part at the end when they went to Professor Oak's, with all the references to the anime. Gary's reaction to Ash's Kingler: priceless!

Anyway, keep up the great writing and looking forward to the sequel!

~Neko

coolness

AWESOME! Misty hitting on Jack, funny. I believe in AAML though.

please would give a sequal im so in love with your writing and i looked really hard for the answers and i truly would like to know what happens next. You are an superb writer.

Thank you,

gamergirlavs

p.s. sorry for spelling

It sucks that it's over now. But I can't wait to see the sequel. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

BTw: what's the resource you found? It didn't show in the chapter. I might need it, if you know what I mean *laugh*

anywho, Can't wait to see the sequel. Don't keep me in limbo too long. LOL

~Just keep swimming

Blake

to be quite frank i didnt like that ending, why you did that?

but i cant wait to see the sequel

...and may I just add that you are spectacularly gifted at writing Pokemon battles, so if you should get the urge to write any more Pokemon fics, related to this one or not, I will read. :)

Really amazing story, disappointed that it's ending. Hope the sequel is really long!

Wow! That was unexpected! Excellent writing, but I'm going to miss Jack! :(

Oi! What an ending! I didn't see that one coming... please, please, PLEASE update soon with the epilogue! I won't be able to stand it...

(and just when they were together too... drat that evil man)

She isn't REALLY taking the offer, is she? I mean, it's great, but... she'd give up everything for her career...

And for Jack to just leave!

Sorry I'm ranting, but that just goes to show how much your story drew me into it. (And i always wanted to have all the eevee evolutions too!)

good. this story will go far...oh and did you know that they're makin a dragon,ground,poisen, and a normall type evolution for eevee?

I've always kind of wondered what night shade looked like. Nice description of it. Another very nice chapter.

Loved it, as always! Damn, you're good! Awaiting the next! :D