The best story I've read in a while! Thank u for the suspense, the drama, the action...the action *coughcoughwinkwinkcough* A truly amzing story, even with some of the bumps along the way. I hope u r happy with the way Kishimoto-sensei ended the manga.
Btw:
This is literally one of my only reviews that i have left for ANY author... Being one who loves reading and most things related to literature, it means that, in my mind, u are quite special. Good luck! And good day.

I knew you would do something about the arm. Good idea having the Kyubi regrow it, I was thinking maybe you would use Hashirama cells like in the Manga but this is a good choice as well.

So let me get this straight, Naruto lost a lot, Sakura lost a little, and Sasuke lost his power but it was a curse that was corrupting him so I wouldn't count it as much of a loss. Why is it the good people lossing the most? I guess I'll have to find out but damn this was a depressing chapter.

Yeah right, there would be no way they all die in the forest. What kind of ninja village would the hidden leaf village be if they didn't notice all the fighting and the giant explosion that follows the rasenshuriken. I know someone will come for them, the only question I have is who?

That last line sent shivers up my spine, you are doing well with this fic. I may not care for Sakura as a character but you are doing well portraying her in your story.

You did great with the lemon, it was erotic, romantic, and all in all a touching first time lemon. I felt the emotions wash over me as I read and could feel the two souls of lovers bonding. Great story can't wait to continue reading.

Great story! I loved it :)

So Sakura became part of the tram 8 or what ..she is more with Kurenai and Kiba/Shino than Hinata lol ..
Ond Hinata is so ooc

Great job this is one of the best ones ive ever read(;

Sasusaku emo pairing

Whenever I go back and read this fic, I'll always chuckle remembering that people once thought that Minato was named Arashi and that people did not know that the fourth Hokage is Naruto's father. XD ahhh, memories...

Hinata was awesome

I don't think Shino would volunteer any of his valuable allies to be crushed, when surely they can release a pheromone that would signal to his internal allies without them needing to die. I'm thinking of a clip I saw on yt where he saw a venus fly trap eat a fly and did a minor freak-out.

Also, you might want to re-arrange your sentences. Rather than starting out with the end, and going back - like talking about Hinata waking up a second time, than going back and explaining that Naruto was holding her the first time and caused her to pass out again - you might just make that part of the action that moves the story forward. Something like - Hinata wakes up, sees its Naruto holding her and promptly passes out again, Shino decides to be the one to wake her the second time while Naruto looks on in confusion and Sakura shakes her head. Then they continue on. - It's less confusing that way.

Otherwise, a decent start.

Thank you for writing this story! I mean like 67 chapters are a lot! it must have taken a long time to write this! Nevertheless the story is really good and I enjoyed everything. 3 3

hehehe its kinda funny to see how stupid people were back then just because they didnt know...but we all know the 4ths name lol