My Family is my favourite comedy show of all time. It's brilliantly written and all the characters are extremely enteraining in their own way and you've captured them marvelously.

A fantastic one shot that's done justice to this great show.

Kudos to you. 3

~Abbey

My Family is the best :D

Good story!

Would have maybe been better if it had been a little longer but it's still good ]

I think you could have added a lot more detail in this and yeah, it was funny xD And another thing, you should be careful of spelling errors as I spotted a few. Also, try to establish the plot too.

Nice start (it is just start, isn't it?)

do keep going, i need to know what the job is!

Great chappy

Aggie x

This is good so keep going!

Hello!

Cute start! Definately seems like the Harpers to me! _

Just one thing, you should probably watch out for your tenses - with this, you've started in the past tense then moved into the present. It's only a minor thing, but keeping everything in the same tense helps the story to flow better as a whole.

Still, I love the characterisation you've created - they all seem to be exactly as they're portrayed in the show, so brilliant work with that!

Gonna update? You probably should! I'd read on! :)

Blessed Be!

Peanut x X x

AW good start I liked it, I love my family

X Kellyx